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by dkdi3983
Wed 06 Mar 2024, 03:40
Forum: Referees Only
Topic: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback
Replies: 25
Views: 875

Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

p. 8, second column, Pirates section, first paragraph: In the last sentence, change "Pirate of the Vistula" to "Pirate s of the Vistula" and change "presence s " to "presence" (changes underlined ). p. 8, second column, Pirates section, second paragraph: In t...
by dkdi3983
Wed 06 Mar 2024, 03:17
Forum: Referees Only
Topic: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback
Replies: 25
Views: 875

Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

p. 6, first column, first paragraph: Change "Mankind’s oldest highways: rivers, lakes, and the ocean become again the only reliable method of travel." to "Mankind‘s oldest highways — rivers, lakes, and the ocean —again become the only reliable method of travel." (changes underli...
by dkdi3983
Wed 06 Mar 2024, 03:15
Forum: Referees Only
Topic: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback
Replies: 25
Views: 875

Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

p. 5: Change "you got it" to "you got it," (with added comma inside the double quotes). Add comma after "when I asked what".
by dkdi3983
Wed 06 Mar 2024, 03:08
Forum: Referees Only
Topic: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback
Replies: 25
Views: 875

Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Encounter Card: Poor Man's Dam [Ace/Diamonds] (PDF p. 35): In the last sentence, remove the superfluous comma after "(half a tank and one reload)".
by dkdi3983
Wed 06 Mar 2024, 01:54
Forum: Loremaster's Only
Topic: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback
Replies: 94
Views: 3878

Re: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback

p. 175, The Watcher in the Water profile: As currently written, the Many Arms Fell Ability means that the Watcher can't attack at all after suffering two Wounds. Just checking that this is deliberate… Edit: As pointed out by a later poster, I neglected the Watcher's Might of 3, so it takes four Wou...
by dkdi3983
Wed 06 Mar 2024, 01:40
Forum: Loremaster's Only
Topic: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback
Replies: 94
Views: 3878

Re: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback

Found another sentence that doesn’t make sense. Pg 159 in the wailing stairs paragraph The Stairs are the safest route to the mines currently extant , so Malech uses the stair to send Slave labourers down to dig; What doesn't make sense about it? It might be slightly clearer to write, "The Sta...
by dkdi3983
Wed 06 Mar 2024, 01:38
Forum: Loremaster's Only
Topic: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback
Replies: 94
Views: 3878

Re: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback

he prised it open
Should it say "he pried it open"
Both forms are correct; "prised" is more common in UK English and is thus a better fit for Tolkien, IMO.
by dkdi3983
Wed 06 Mar 2024, 01:22
Forum: Loremaster's Only
Topic: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback
Replies: 94
Views: 3878

Re: Moria Alpha PDF Feedback

p. 147, location 2 (The Doors of Durin): Run-on sentence: A successful SCAN test is needed to identify the spot in the cliff face where the doors lie; even then, the Ithildin inscription “sleeps until it is touched by one who speaks words now long forgotten in Middle-earth,” requires a successful C...
by dkdi3983
Sat 07 Oct 2023, 23:48
Forum: General (English)
Topic: Bestiary Beta Feedback
Replies: 45
Views: 11755

Re: Bestiary Beta Feedback

Not an error per se , but a place where clarification would be useful: does a Hobgoblin (p. 8) get to make the WIL roll before deciding whether to use their Fearless ability? In other words, which of these two is it? Make the WIL roll. If you fail, spend 2 WP to activate Fearless and succeed instead...
by dkdi3983
Sat 18 Feb 2023, 03:42
Forum: GM Only (English)
Topic: Dragonbane BETA v3 Adventure Book Feedback - Chapter 1 Introduction
Replies: 7
Views: 670

Re: Dragonbane BETA v3 Adventure Book Feedback - Chapter 1 Introduction

The Black Knight. On a distant hilltop, the player characters see a knight in black on a huge, black horse, like a dark silhouette against the night sky. The knight rears his steed and vanishes. This is Sathmog’s herald, but the player characters cannot stop him now. I may have missed it, but i sea...