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Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Tue 05 Mar 2024, 18:43

Hi!

Please use this thread to post feedback and report any typos or errors in the Beta-PDF of the Hostile Waters expansion. Please note:
  • Before reporting an error, please check to see if it has already been reported. If so, don't report it again.
  • Do not use this thread for discussions, only for direct feedback. If you want to discuss some topic you are welcome to start a new forum thread.
Please report your feedback no later than March 10.
Thank you!
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Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Wed 06 Mar 2024, 01:47

p21 under Tugboat " carry a substantial number of sullies or passengers" presume this is meant to be "supplies".
 
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Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Wed 06 Mar 2024, 03:08

Encounter Card: Poor Man's Dam [Ace/Diamonds] (PDF p. 35): In the last sentence, remove the superfluous comma after "(half a tank and one reload)".
 
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Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Wed 06 Mar 2024, 03:15

p. 5: Change "you got it" to "you got it," (with added comma inside the double quotes). Add comma after "when I asked what".
 
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Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Wed 06 Mar 2024, 03:17

p. 6, first column, first paragraph: Change "Mankind’s oldest highways: rivers, lakes, and the ocean become again the only reliable method of travel." to "Mankind‘s oldest highwaysrivers, lakes, and the ocean—again become the only reliable method of travel." (changes underlined)
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Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Wed 06 Mar 2024, 03:40

p. 8, second column, Pirates section, first paragraph: In the last sentence, change "Pirate of the Vistula" to "Pirates of the Vistula" and change "presences" to "presence" (changes underlined).

p. 8, second column, Pirates section, second paragraph: In the first sentence, add a comma after "the fortunate part". In the second sentence, change "of the pirate" to "of pirates" since the rest of the paragraph is talking about pirates in the plural.
 
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Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Thu 07 Mar 2024, 00:26

Page 8, under the "Politics & Power" paragraph.

"Water barons are real. They control damns,-"

Change "damns" to dams.
 
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Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Thu 07 Mar 2024, 00:32

Page 9 under the "The Historcal Role Of Waterways" subsection.

Paragraph 3:
"No matter where you game is set-"

Change "you" to 'your'.
 
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Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Thu 07 Mar 2024, 01:41

Please add at least a couple of military hovercraft. Thank you.
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Re: Hostile Waters Beta Feedback

Thu 07 Mar 2024, 16:18

The Sentinel virus on p. 89 has an unlikely incubation time of 1 shift. In practice that means that the infection will not be able to spread much, as people will fall ill before they manage to unknowingly pass it on. And most likely die, minimising the spread even further. But that might be intentional?

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