Fri 22 Apr 2022, 11:30
p 118, happened to spot while skimming, typo: two instances of 'Using this optional rules' - settle on singular or plural!
I think those optional rules on time limits could use a sentence explaining why/when you would use them.
And on Borrowing Items on that page, maybe say that of course a hero can carry another's item but can only use it as a normal item of its type? (Eg Sting doesn't somehow lose its pointiness if Sam carries it.) But spending Fellowship enables its superior qualities.
p119 - are you sure you want to include the corebook errata here rather than as a separate download? That ties the two books into each other's updates/editions.
- and one thing spotted in there - in previous errata Lady Elwen's entire stat block was to be replaced by the standard one for a fell wraith, but here it's not, which as I recall makes a big difference to how tough she is - so do double-check.
- and introducing the errata about the nameless thing tables, tell the reader that's what they are.
General point - I would very much like to see a map with the adventure sites in the book marked on it. I was expecting that in the endpapers. Maybe it could be added to the one in the back, with numbered spots and a key or with full labels that stand out.