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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames
Posted: Mon 22 Dec 2025, 17:21
by Barbarianbob
The ogre brothers on page 65 should have at least 5 levels of Robust to have 28 Hit Points.
Book looks fantastic!
Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames
Posted: Mon 22 Dec 2025, 20:13
by ledmundo
On the credits page (page 5), ORIGINAL IDÉA should read ORIGINAL IDEA
Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames
Posted: Mon 22 Dec 2025, 20:49
by BecksBC3
Page 30, under 6. THE CHAMBER OF TRIALS:
"Suspended from the ceiling is a cave made of salt-bleached fish bones..."
Based on context, this should be cage, not cave.
Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames
Posted: Mon 22 Dec 2025, 22:06
by Nasaldramus
Page 7, rumour 2 “daggers-sized fangs” should be “dagger-sized fangs”
Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames
Posted: Tue 23 Dec 2025, 11:19
by Ugglefar
- The Harbor is sometimes capitalised, and sometimes not.
Page 5: "...the Harbor - the tar-scented gateway to..."
Page 7: "Folk in the harbor and the Dung..."
Page 7: "At the harbor you'll find the world's greatest sailors, the Market is..."
- Page 7: "Ever hear the legend of the realm across the sea?"
I think "heard" is more common than "hear" for this type of sentence.
- Page 10: "The first resurgence came during Captain Blackbeak's pirate reign, when many freethinkers came to Arkand to begin the fourth age."
- Maybe I misunderstood the previous text, but wasn't the pirate reign the third age?
Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames
Posted: Tue 23 Dec 2025, 19:39
by VonEther
The Fleshcraft procedures seem very cheap for adventures who can easily find that sort of money. If that was the intent, however, then never mind.
Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames
Posted: Tue 23 Dec 2025, 22:09
by JimLeCat
On p.14 the second dragon knight is called Tarlak, everywhere else they are called Tatrios.
Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames
Posted: Tue 23 Dec 2025, 22:24
by VonEther
The first time ELIZA is mentioned to be a halfling is page 69 in room #9 vs her profile two pages previous.
Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames
Posted: Wed 24 Dec 2025, 04:33
by JimLeCat
On p.52, the title for the plan of the White Feather IV is still in Swedish.
Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames
Posted: Wed 24 Dec 2025, 20:28
by ledmundo
Chapter 3, page 69, the last line on the page refers to a door to the Dormitory (#7), but the Dormitory is # 8 in the map.
Also Chapter 3, page 79, the description of 2. WAITING ROOM is missing a door to the 4. CONVALESCENCE ROOMS to the west.