Barbarianbob
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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames

Mon 22 Dec 2025, 17:21

The ogre brothers on page 65 should have at least 5 levels of Robust to have 28 Hit Points.

Book looks fantastic!
 
ledmundo
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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames

Mon 22 Dec 2025, 20:13

On the credits page (page 5), ORIGINAL IDÉA should read ORIGINAL IDEA
 
BecksBC3
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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames

Mon 22 Dec 2025, 20:49

Page 30, under 6. THE CHAMBER OF TRIALS:

"Suspended from the ceiling is a cave made of salt-bleached fish bones..."

Based on context, this should be cage, not cave.
 
Nasaldramus
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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames

Mon 22 Dec 2025, 22:06

Page 7, rumour 2 “daggers-sized fangs” should be “dagger-sized fangs”
Last edited by Nasaldramus on Fri 26 Dec 2025, 11:30, edited 1 time in total.
 
Ugglefar
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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames

Tue 23 Dec 2025, 11:19

  • The Harbor is sometimes capitalised, and sometimes not.
Page 5: "...the Harbor - the tar-scented gateway to..."
Page 7: "Folk in the harbor and the Dung..."
Page 7: "At the harbor you'll find the world's greatest sailors, the Market is..."

  • Page 7: "Ever hear the legend of the realm across the sea?"
I think "heard" is more common than "hear" for this type of sentence.

  • Page 10: "The first resurgence came during Captain Blackbeak's pirate reign, when many freethinkers came to Arkand to begin the fourth age."
- Maybe I misunderstood the previous text, but wasn't the pirate reign the third age?
 
VonEther
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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames

Tue 23 Dec 2025, 19:39

The Fleshcraft procedures seem very cheap for adventures who can easily find that sort of money. If that was the intent, however, then never mind.
 
JimLeCat
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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames

Tue 23 Dec 2025, 22:09

On p.14 the second dragon knight is called Tarlak, everywhere else they are called Tatrios.
 
VonEther
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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames

Tue 23 Dec 2025, 22:24

The first time ELIZA is mentioned to be a halfling is page 69 in room #9 vs her profile two pages previous.
 
JimLeCat
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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames

Wed 24 Dec 2025, 04:33

On p.52, the title for the plan of the White Feather IV is still in Swedish.
 
ledmundo
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Re: Beta Feedback: Arkand – City of Waves and Flames

Wed 24 Dec 2025, 20:28

Chapter 3, page 69, the last line on the page refers to a door to the Dormitory (#7), but the Dormitory is # 8 in the map.
Also Chapter 3, page 79, the description of 2. WAITING ROOM is missing a door to the 4. CONVALESCENCE ROOMS to the west.

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