[WARNING: Minor spoilers for the Starter Set]
We played the first two chapters of the Starter Set with me as Loremaster, and all enjoyed it very much. We'll be moving on to the rest in a few weeks and I'm currently taking my notes on the Most Excellent Fireworks adventure, however, there's one thing that does not seem right when it comes to locations.
The adventure starts out with the PCs chilling in Bag End when "when the horizon to the south-east suddenly lights up with a display of dazzling colours! You can see thin tendrils of smoke curling up in the darkening sky". These phenomena are, of course, caused by fireworks, which we later learn were messed around with near Whitfurrows. Now according to the Shire map included in the Starter Set, the distance between Hobbiton and Whitfurrows are at least 10 leagues (~ 30 miles or 50 kilometers) as the crow flies. I think that's way too far to notice fireworks, even the ones made by Gandalf.
What are your thoughts on this? My idea is to change the first scene to take place in or near Whitfurrows instead of Bag End. But then they should encounter Bruno on the way, because after he messes around with the fireworks, he leaves the estate and goes drinking with his dwarf buddy in Whitfuttows. Alternatively, they could be on their way from the Marish, between Stock and the Boffin family estate, maybe after a visit to Buckland.