Fria Ligans forum

Campaign book:

Page 137:
"...drawing the Charted sphere in vivid golden light."
- I think it should be "Charted Sphere"

Page 139:

"The gas giant lies on the far side of the system, opposite the arrival point of the Greatship."
- The star system map on the same page is counterintuitive to this description. I guess this means that the NIMIS gas giant is 40 AD + 44 AD from the Slipstream tributary? And not just 4 AD between them (44-40)?

Pages 140-141:

• The whole chain of events is a little bit confusing. I assume that the envoys meet the representatives in one of the hangar decks of Rigel? And after the initial attack the two shuttles outside will open fire on the Rigel. So all described attacks are targeting the Rigel.

• "In the aftermath of the attack, both the Rigel and Akhander sustain damage to their drives, sensors, and exterior."

- How come Akhander is damaged if it was not attacked? The ships are independent right? They are not docked to one another?


Page 142:

• Make sure the distances on this page makes sense with the distances on page 139.

• "... but damaged halved..."

- I think it should be "but damage is halved".

Page 145:
"...to the bottom using AGILITY., failure leads..."
- Remove the full stop after AGILITY

Campaign book:

Page 151:
"...the consumption of supply."
- I think in this instance it should be "Supply"

Page 155:
Scan Map missing.

Page 158:
Delve Hazards table

• "Fail: Lose 6 Supply"

- "Lose 6 Supply" shouldn't be in bold text.

• "Search Patrols are regularly sent..."

- I think it should be "Search patrols"

Campaign book:

Page 164:
"...Yelek of the family Nuov orov..."
- Should be "Nuovorov"

Page 165:

• "...Health within Short range.."

- One full stop too many.

• "...see Aftermatch, page XX)"

- Missing punctuation.

Page 167:
"...(Core Rules, page XX)"
- Missing punctuation

Page 169:
"...for the explorers."
- Should be "Explorers"

General comment:
Throughout the PDF you sometimes write "the guilds", and sometimes "the Guilds".

Campaign book
Page 25 - The Razad

Under ‘4 The Canteen’ it reads ‘Flickering lightning’ when I think it should say ‘lighting’

Expedition Book:

Page 7:
"Ship City Standard"
- Missing punctuation

General comment:
In the Campaign book you write the name Akhander and Rigel in italics, while in the Expedition Book you do not.

Campaign book
Page 28

In the section Using stealth, it states ‘Roll AGILITY (stealthy)’ where I think it should be ‘(stealth)’

Expedition Book:

Page 18:
"HABANATHUM STAR SYSTEM"
Should be "HABANATUM"