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Alpha Review - Suggestions on word choice, sentence construction, etc.

Posted: Tue 31 Aug 2021, 23:11
by Ser Jastin
Hi,
While starting to read through the Alpha of the Player's Guide, I've come across a few instances where I had thoughts on particular word choices, sentence construction, possibilities for clarification, etc. These are not errors or typos, so I wouldn't want to clog up the main Alpha feedback threads with them, and was wondering if these are kinds of things you would be looking for feedback on, or whether you'd prefer the reviews be limited to more concrete errors/typos.

Thank you!

Re: Alpha Review - Suggestions on word choice, sentence construction, etc.

Posted: Wed 01 Sep 2021, 00:15
by Jacob Rodgers
Anything that improves clarity is fantastic. Please mark your suggestions as such, so that when we're assembling things we know what you were looking at.