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Alpha Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 2 Action Resolution

Tue 29 Jun 2021, 11:02

Hello!
Please use this thread to report any typos or errors in Chapter 2 - Action Resolution in the Alpha PDF of The One Ring core rulebook. Guidelines to remember:
  • Before reporting an error, please check and see if it already has been reported, and if so, don't report it again.
  • If you want to discuss or feedback something that is not a clear error, don't do it here - instead, please start a new forum post the specific issue.
  • Please report your feedback no later than July 20. After this date, we are unlikely to be able to make any further changes.
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Re: Alpha Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 2 Action Resolution

Tue 29 Jun 2021, 12:52

On page 18, there's a double space after "Add" in "Add the results on all Success Dice to the result of the Feat die" under "How to read the success dice"
 
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Re: Alpha Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 2 Action Resolution

Tue 29 Jun 2021, 12:54

Action Resolution
Page 21 last line the Eye of Mordor rules start on page 169 (not @@)
 
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Re: Alpha Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 2 Action Resolution

Tue 29 Jun 2021, 13:05

Page 16 - WHEN TO ROLL - last sentence should be reformatted in #3 MANIPULATION with #1 and #2 so that it is indented correctly with no blank line.
 
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Re: Alpha Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 2 Action Resolution

Tue 29 Jun 2021, 13:12

Action resolution
Page 23 column 2 final two lines

refers to blank character sheet on page @@and a reference to a website @@.com.
(Obviously this is the work in progress, but both @@ will need to be altered eventually)
 
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Re: Alpha Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 2 Action Resolution

Tue 29 Jun 2021, 14:53

Page 21, section PENALTY SUCCESS DICE, 2nd paragraph:

Penalties are normally indicated in the text as lose
(1d) or more, meaning that a Player­ hero rolls one or
more Success dice less
(down to a minimum of zero
Success dice).

In the bolded passage, "less" should come before "Success dice".
 
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Re: Alpha Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 2 Action Resolution

Tue 29 Jun 2021, 14:54

I noticed that the "t" symbol is referred to as an 'icon'. Would it not be more appropriate to call it a 'rune' ?
 
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Re: Alpha Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 2 Action Resolution

Tue 29 Jun 2021, 17:42

p.18. 1st column example: "With the Success dice showing 4 and 5, and the Feat Die an 8, Hanar’s player does not need to do any maths to know that the Dwarf succeeded."

Yes you do have to do math. 4+5+8 = 17. But maybe through inspection, so I'd change the last sentence to: "With the Success dice showing 4 and 5, and the Feat Die an 8, 4+5+8 >= 13, so Hanar the Dwarf succeeded."
 
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Re: Alpha Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 2 Action Resolution

Tue 29 Jun 2021, 17:57

p.19. Special Success Table.

"Cancel a Failure" the spacing is wonky, there seems to be extra space after the word "Cancel".

Gain insight: Awkward phrasing and punctuation with commas and semi-colon.

"For example, while helping a sick individual with a HEALING roll you discover the trace of poison; or, you spot a sentry while sneaking into a ruin with a roll of STEALTH."

should be:

"For example, while helping a sick individual with a HEALING roll you discover the trace of poison; or with a roll of STEALTH you spot a sentry while sneaking into a ruin."
 
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Re: Alpha Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 2 Action Resolution

Tue 29 Jun 2021, 18:04

p.21 Penalty Success Dice.

As per post #6 above, the right phrasing should be:

Penalties are normally indicated in the text as lose (1d) or more, meaning that a Player-hero rolls fewer Success dice (down to a minimum of zero Success dice).
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