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I figured I might as well try to be productive while I read, so I started keeping editing notes from the start. As you’ll see in the file I’ve linked, I may've gotten a little carried away. Consequently, I still haven't read past the first chapter Not sure if dissection at this level is actually helpful this late in the game, but I figure it can't hurt to pass along what I have. Take what you will, and I apologize for the inevitable overlap.
(A couple words of explanation on the file itself. The bulk of the entries revolve around either punctuation--mainly comma usage--or awkward word choice/phrasing. Only a few of them affect actual readability, but I find that technical precision and clarity is generally worth pursuing. I’ve tried to highlight in yellow any entries that reflect a personal attempt to smooth out the English rather than a reference to a hard-and-fast rule.)
The targeting scope is a cybernetic implant, but isn't marked with the (CYB) tag [as the soldier's cybernetic muscles (CYB) are, or the pilot's targeting scope (CYB) for the matter].
Also, cybernetic implants are accompanied by a matching Talent choice; targeting scope (CYB) is absent from the solider's talent list.
An enforcer from the Syndicate fires a missile against
Sabah’s gravcraft. The attack hits and deals 4 points
of damage. Sabah tests the gravcraft’s armor (Armor
Rating 3), and rolls one six. The gravcraft takes 3
points of damage.
In example missile does 4 damage but page 127 states that a missile launcher deals 6 damage
Page 346, table 15.2 difficult, should be difficulty
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Have you though about having something like a public Trello board where typos could be listed categorised and eventually moved to completed when incorporated in the edited Beta PDF?