Im a little lost with the black Madonna. It os not written in a fashion that lends itself to a scenario, with events and clues and series of encounters. Its nothing more than some set piece locations withloose suggested forces.
I expect more from a scenario, specifically clues for the pcs to pick up on. Nowhere in the info printed does any patticular contact indicate where the black madonna might be. The diary suggests a castle, but im not sure its specific enough (there are lots of castles) for players to follow.
Also the cave isnt on the map, so how exactly are they supposed to find it?
As a GM i would have liked a summary of people who know specific info, how to meet them, and suggestions on how to come by the secret info.
None of that is present.
Suggest that in the future stick to established scenario outlines.
Each npc should have a list of info they know, what they are willing to trade for it, and or how difficult they are to persuade.
An encounter at the popes crashed helicopter is a missed opportunity here too. Clues there might lead pcs to suspect he is alive and in hiding.
Finally, there are notes that suggest the black madonnas value, but not specific, i fact none of the gear in the rules are given values….. and theres a misprint on the barter table, fuel is listed twice, but one should be food.