Fria Ligans forum

Pages 101-113:

The text in the tables sometimes end with a punctuation, and sometimes it does not.

Page 108:

• "CARGO: 2000 kg" - 2,000 kg?

on page 18 "Origin". I think it would be a huge help with there was a sentence or two describing the origins. It'd help players identify with one of the origins and give them a jumping off point for character creation. as of right now it's just stats bonus with no real connections to the world.

Page 48: combat talent Executioner is missing [1].

Under several of the equipment and weapons features it lists "battery" as a feature but does not specify what that feature means.

On page 48, Dirty Fighter says 'bamage' not damage

On page 110, the Airlock and Amphibious upgrades are listed on the same row in the table.

This is a call for the game designers.
I read the alpha pdf and one thing that stick with me was that one of the main theme of the game is intrigue, which I can see in a game where a party of explorer goes to a site that could be in possession of another faction and convince them to enter the site, or an adventure where they have to find a way to get a concession (something like mineral concession in Yukon with the gold seekers). I imagined there would be a important part of the book about that, since it's a KEY THEME.

You can imagine my disappointmente when I reached the part about social conflict: less than a page compared to the 8 pages dedicated to combat, which isn't a KEY THEME, and just the adding/subtracting modifiers without any kind of structure like initiative, turns, special actions, etc.

I understand that it's probably pretty late to make an important change like adding a consistent subset of rules, but I think it would be very rewarding for players to do something different and really play out the social conflict.

This is my major critique to the book until now. I am very curious about how you managed exploration.

Page 48: combat talent Executioner is missing [1].

Or should be [1-3] according to the table.

Page 62: Flow chart, ranged combat:

The bottom box, second to the right: a bird symbol (6, success) is placed over or under the text ’dam-’.