Ugglefar
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Wed 25 Dec 2024, 23:58

Page 59:
Under SNEAK ATTACK is says that you get a +3 modifier to your attack, while under RESTRAINED & UNAWARE OPPONENTS it says that you get +2 dice to the roll. Is it supposed to be a difference between the two?
 
Zatch
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Thu 26 Dec 2024, 21:21

P 89 under Staple Foods there is an extraneous comma after "algae"
 
Curious Gust
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Thu 26 Dec 2024, 23:36

The Cutting Torch has on page 99 a cost of 900 and on page 104 it is 1000.
 
Phenixfox
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Fri 27 Dec 2024, 00:02

On page 48 Social talents.
Thug is noted as level 1-3 but reading the text suggests that it is a 1 level talent.
 
Phenixfox
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Fri 27 Dec 2024, 00:22

Page 53
See pattern:
Last sentence starts with ”they” implying the group but the talent is focused at one member, should it read ”You can also recall..”?
 
Forged
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Fri 27 Dec 2024, 08:03

Regarding initiative, it would be nice to have optional rules to replace cards with dice rolls. I'd house rule it for my own games regardless. I have experience with another game with card initiative (Savage Worlds). And, yes, it works well, but I found I hated using cards so much that I stopped playing that game.

The first edition of Coriolis had both options available (dice or cards). I would love to see at least optional rules to support dice based initiative rolls.
 
jmp1200
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Fri 27 Dec 2024, 18:22

Page 51:

Talents table references Talent Type of "Machine" but text on page 50 uses "Equipment".
 
Ugglefar
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Sat 28 Dec 2024, 12:06

Page 63:

Under INTERROGATION it says that "You get a +2 modifier to your roll for your opponent being held captive." However, under NEGOTIATING POSITION it says that you get a +1 die if "Your opponent is in custody or held captive by you."

Which modifier is correct?
 
Ugglefar
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Sat 28 Dec 2024, 15:03

Page 89:
  • "...heirloom implants provided by the guilds..." - Should it be guilds or Guilds?

Page 91:
  • "As explained in chapter 2..." - Throughout the main text of the PDF you sometimes write "chapter" in the middle of a sentence, and sometimes you write "Chapter".
  • Explorer sheet vs. Explorer Sheet. - Both versions are used in the main text.
 
Ugglefar
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Sat 28 Dec 2024, 19:01

Page 98:
  • Cryo projector does not have a cost listed. Is this intentional?
  • Grenade launcher does not have a cost listed. Is this intentional?

Page 100:
  • Do shields give any armour rating? If you can only use them for blocking close combat attacks most other melee weapons do the job better as it is written now.

Page 101:
  • Consider changing the colour of the page number or removing it.

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