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ALPHA Feedback Thread

Mon 23 Dec 2024, 11:30

Hi!

Please use this thread to post feedback and report any typos or errors in the Alpha pdf for Coriolis: The Great Dark.

Please note:
This is the first installment of the alpha pdf and only contains the first six chapters. We will add chapters about delving, space travel and the setting as we finish the alpha layout. All text, layout and art is subjective to change and not final. Please note that page references (xx) are not yet done as things may move around, so please don't report those as errors.

Before reporting an error, please check to see if it has already been reported. If so, don't report it again.

Thank you!
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Mon 23 Dec 2024, 15:32

Page 17. "Your Explorer is your alter ego in the game. Throught..."

Should be "Through"

p.s. First into the dark!
 
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Mon 23 Dec 2024, 20:21

Typo in "this".
Pg. 56
TOO MANY DRAWS?
Combat in thi game is fast and deadly, and rarely lasts longer than...
 
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Mon 23 Dec 2024, 22:05

Page 17, Create your Explorer step by step, step 13:
"Get equipment and from the Explorers guild".

Perhaps that sentence is missing the word "weapons"?
 
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Mon 23 Dec 2024, 22:35

Page 9 of the Introduction, in "The New and the Old" block.

"You do not need to know anything from the precious game"

While I agree that the previous game is precious, I assume you meant "precious" to be "previous". :D
 
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Mon 23 Dec 2024, 22:49

You might want to do a document search for all the instances of "City", "City's", "city", and "city's" and make sure they are all as you intended. I've seen multiple instances of Ship City referred to as City and city variations where I'm not sure why the difference between the use of uppercase or lowercase in given usages.
 
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Mon 23 Dec 2024, 23:11

Page 48:
"DIRTY FIGHTER [1]: Your unarmed close combat attacks have a base bamage rating of 2"

The word "bamage" should probably be "damage".
 
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Mon 23 Dec 2024, 23:39

Page 14, segment 2: The Explorer Crew and The Bird.

" Led by the veteran explorer master Moska"

In other places I see "master Moska" as "Master Moska". Might want to do a document search for the two spellings of "master/Master" when paired with "Moska".
 
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Mon 23 Dec 2024, 23:43

The potential for maneuver spam is a concern in the new rules. Since these are free actions with powerful effects, there is no downside to spam every available maneuver in every single engagement (especially those restoring resources). I wish there was a more sensible approach, like one maneuver per player per engagement.
 
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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Tue 24 Dec 2024, 00:41

Page 19, under Specialty:

" If the talent is the same the one you got
from your origin, instead increase its level to 2."

I think you want "same as the" in the underlined bit above.
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