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Beta-feedback - Realms of the Three Rings
Posted: Tue 10 Dec 2024, 16:30
by Nils
Hello!
Please use this thread to report any errors you find in the Beta PDF of the Realms of the Three Rings expansion. Please report your feedback as soon as possible, preferably no later than January 5.
Thank you!
Re: Beta-feedback - Realms of the Three Rings
Posted: Tue 10 Dec 2024, 18:35
by jophan
The TOC is only partially hyperlinks, many of the headings are not clickable.
Re: Beta-feedback - Realms of the Three Rings
Posted: Tue 10 Dec 2024, 20:07
by CaptHaddock
Page 18, the descriptions for 8. THE CAUSEWAY GATE and 9. THE BRIDGE GATE appear to have been switched with each other, when looking at the map on page 14.
Re: Beta-feedback - Realms of the Three Rings
Posted: Tue 10 Dec 2024, 20:07
by HoosierCaro
First, thank you for the fantastic Christmas present! I have been very impressed so far.
One note: on pg 87, you reference how Arroval wants to end the curse of the Singing Maiden, but I can't find any other reference to either the curse or the maiden. Is this an oversight or am I missing something?
Re: Beta-feedback - Realms of the Three Rings
Posted: Tue 10 Dec 2024, 20:31
by Linklite
On p66, right hand side in "The Waylaying if the Evenstar" section, second sentence: The first 'i' in "if the Company's Patron is Elrond..." should be capitalised, since it's the beginning of a sentence.
Re: Beta-feedback - Realms of the Three Rings
Posted: Tue 10 Dec 2024, 21:52
by HoosierCaro
One more reference without a connection: Gildor is referenced in passing on pg 121 as someone who stops by Whitethorn Hay; however, to my knowledge, Gildor is not referenced in any other ToR2e publication.
Re: Beta-feedback - Realms of the Three Rings
Posted: Tue 10 Dec 2024, 22:06
by Ratatosk
I noticed on pages 6 and 8 (and possibly elsewhere if it reappears) that the Elvish name Eressëa is misspelled as Erëssea.
Re: Beta-feedback - Realms of the Three Rings
Posted: Tue 10 Dec 2024, 22:45
by CaptHaddock
Page 37, the section titled THE LIBRARY OF ELROND describes the main library being on the ground floor, but the layout diagram on page 34 does not show a library. Perhaps location 9, labelled 'Armoury' in the key, should be relabelled as 'Library'. (This error has also previously been observed in the Rivendell booklet).
Re: Beta-feedback - Realms of the Three Rings
Posted: Tue 10 Dec 2024, 22:50
by Dunheved
On page 12 (pdf page 16) there are descriptions of the followers of "Feanor's second brother" and later the followers of his "third brother".
1. Feanor was the eldest of the three sons of Finwe.
2. The two younger sons would be the second son, Fingolfin and the third son, Finarfin of Finwe.
3. But they could only be the first (half-) brother and the second (half-) brother of Feanor.
Further note: the third son / second half brother, Finarfin, did not go into exile back to Middle-earth (although his children did). So is it fair to say that his "followers" live yet in Lindon? Finarfin's followers would have stayed with him in Valinor.
EDIT: Agree with Capt Haddock in the previous post concerning the Unseen Library. But would add that the descriptions in the text of the Entrance Hall have features that cannot be seen in the drawing of the house. Page 35 (page 39 of the pdf) there are four lines immediately before the section The Great Hall: Where are the covered/screened passages from the Entrance Hall going into the Hall of Fire and into the Great Hall? Why is there only ONE flight of stairs instead of a flight "on both sides" ? On the same page the Great Hall description does not tie up with the drawing very well at all.
Where is the screened entrance from "the Corridor" going into the Great Hall? There IS a doorway from the Corridor, but using this as the way in puts the orientation of the tables and Elrond's seat in some confusion.
Re: Beta-feedback - Realms of the Three Rings
Posted: Wed 11 Dec 2024, 04:28
by Doktor
Page 37, the section titled THE LIBRARY OF ELROND describes the main library being on the ground floor, but the layout diagram on page 34 does not show a library. Perhaps location 9, labelled 'Armoury' in the key, should be relabelled as 'Library'. (This error has also previously been observed in the Rivendell booklet).
Came here to say it seemed that error was not corrected