Khaelim
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Re: The Electric State Beta PDF Feedback

Wed 01 May 2024, 21:54

Hi,

Page 189: The description for Ranielle Ganaway is the same as Old Toby from page 188.
 
zeitiger
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Re: The Electric State Beta PDF Feedback

Wed 01 May 2024, 23:34

PreGen Talent „Loner“ = „Lone Wolf“?

PreGen has no neurocaster

Page 155, white line on the map

Vehicle accident tumble ends in a total party kill, because 6 damage is real hard to negate.
 
rubberlikewalrus
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Re: The Electric State Beta PDF Feedback

Thu 02 May 2024, 03:45

Hello, it was already said on pg 21 that there is a case of a sentence having abandon instead of abandoned, but the same typo appears in the second sentence of the same paragraph.

In addition, on pg 30 it says that "Some on the Mode 6 team believe this emergence a deus ex machina" but it seems like it should be saying "this emergence is a deus ex machina"
 
Eynowd
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Re: The Electric State Beta PDF Feedback

Thu 02 May 2024, 04:43

On p44: "acute fevers, stomach flues"

"flues" is the wrong word for that context. A flue is the opening in a chimney where the smoke comes out.

I've looked it up, and there seems to be disagreement on whether "flu" or "flus" is the correct plural form of "flu".
 
Arkavenger
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Re: The Electric State Beta PDF Feedback

Thu 02 May 2024, 10:12

Reporting a spelling error on page 115. The first paragraph "The Kicker" rules section. The spelling states: an event that happened just before the Journey stared, creating
urgency and drama. I believe the proper word that should be used is "started, not stared"
 
RobJN
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Re: The Electric State Beta PDF Feedback

Thu 02 May 2024, 10:26

p. 112 "Preparing the Journey" boxed text begins:
To prepare your Journey, follow the below stops.
The players can be involved in steps 1–7.
I think this should read "... follow the below steps."

Side note: this reads easier in English as "... follow the steps below."
 
jj_kapelusz
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Re: The Electric State Beta PDF Feedback

Thu 02 May 2024, 12:15

Page 42, the second headline reads "A THE NORTH AND EAST". The A should be represented by the symbol as per other headings.
 
RobJN
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Re: The Electric State Beta PDF Feedback

Fri 03 May 2024, 04:05

p. 203, the description of the three girls text box, Shana's ends with
She wears typical grunge clothes like jeans with a flannel shirt toed around the waist.
Unless she is more than double-jointed or just really flexible, I'm pretty sure that flannel shirt should be "tied" around the waist.

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