Again, check the blight manifestation. Confusing. First you say it leads to damage when you are broken. A new paragraph, and it says it leads to death saves. Is it both?
Why divide the info? It can be interpreted as some sort of mistake as well as running the risk of a gm checking for the rules only spotting one of them. Confusing as well.
You are unlucky, I have worked with editing and also like game design
