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The Delving Business:
The Explorers Guild is a loosely knit organization that operates from The Outpost, an old pub-turned-headquarters within a repurposed ship hull...
Since when are there pubs in Coriolis? Sure, the culture has developed since leaving the Third Horizon, but unless the Diaspora took a detour via Great Britain on their way to the lost horizon I don't think such wording is appropriate for the settting.
EDIT: Also, a related note: I have only had time to skim the QS but there seems to be a shift in the drug culture towards a more western style in general, with alcohol seemingly being more common than other intoxicants. This may seem like a small detail but as a long time Coriolis fan I think it is imperative that this version of the game retains the cultural differences that sets it apart from other settings. Even if you (the creators) want to move away from potential oritentalism and mock arabic script etc, make sure to make it something other than a lazy return to western values and social/cultural styles, make it a believable development from 3H into something new instead, but definately something distinctly non-western. This new game has great potential and I think you are on the right track with much of it, but please give us a culture to 'Delve' into as well, it makes the game/world more fun to roleplay in and discover. <3