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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 16:31

Page 11, "the Swarm Size can be raised due to [...] bright light (e.g., a building on fire)," then on page 12 at location 7 there is a "big fire".

Shouldn't the place already be swarmed with walkers then?

And who is lighting a bonfire under these circumstances? Do the wolves have a death wish?
 
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 16:42

Page 15, "jean overalls": shouldn't this be "jeans overall"?
 
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 16:46

Page 16, "knife hidden in his left boot," either something is missing or the comma should not be there.
 
Raldanash
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 17:29

p. 12 - "1. Residential Building: A two story-house" shoud be "a two-storey house" or if you want to go American "two-story house" - hyphenation still wrong. Same again in no 8. "two-storey"
 
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 22:28

Page 10
and make it Raven Hill
This should be
and make it to Raven Hill
 
GhostCommando10
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sun 28 May 2023, 06:24

Page 10, "to spill about Evergreen": I am not a native English speaker. Is this a common idiom or slang, then fine. I had expected "speak about" or "talk about".
To spill means to give confidential or secret information about something.
 
GhostCommando10
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sun 28 May 2023, 06:26

Page 15, "jean overalls": shouldn't this be "jeans overall"?
Jean overalls are correct. Overalls are a type of clothing and jean is saying what type they are. They could also say denim overalls.
 
GhostCommando10
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sun 28 May 2023, 06:31

The character sheet for Ally / Isaac has Bible written randomly under Gear. Looks like it came from Bonnie / Rooster’s sheet.
 
RobJN
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sun 28 May 2023, 10:56

p. 12 - "1. Residential Building: A two story-house" shoud be "a two-storey house" or if you want to go American "two-story house" - hyphenation still wrong. Same again in no 8. "two-storey"
Either that, or change the description to a really, really small library?
 
Micaelian
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Mon 29 May 2023, 00:48

Page 2, The Wolves: "They mutilate themselves by carving a letter W into their foreheads, and they mark buildings they’ve visited by a spray-painting a W or their signature threat". The underlined "a" should be eliminated.

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