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TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Fri 26 May 2023, 15:23

Hi!

Please use this thread to post feedback and report any typos or errors in the Beta version of the Wolves' Den starter set survival scenario. Guidelines to remember:
  • Before reporting an error, please check to see if it has already been reported. If so, don't report it again.
  • Do not use this thread for discussions, only for direct feedback. If you want to discuss some topic you are welcome to start a new forum thread.
  • Please report your feedback no later than June 4, 2023.
Thank you!
 
Amraphel
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Fri 26 May 2023, 16:31

Character Sheets: PC #1 Cecil/Cecilia Hart
Description: "Tall and brawny, with strait … hair”. Should be straight.
 
Pelhle
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Fri 26 May 2023, 18:12

Pages 6-7: Raven Hill

Raven Hill is mentioned on various places in the text (and chapter text) which is correct, but on the map on page 7 it´s Ravenhill.
 
NurseNoodle
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Fri 26 May 2023, 19:17

Page 4 - AT THE BRIDGE

Can you either bold the bracketed numbers and/or break them up in a list.

It’s easy to miss these numbers and correlated them to the map, unlike the further sections which have a corresponding description of each number
 
doc-t
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 11:30

Page 4, "If you have fewer than five players, you should start by handing out PC 1, then 2, and so on.": What to do with the remaining PCs? Discard them or do they become NPCs in the group, played by the GM? Should be clarified in the text.
 
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 11:33

Page 4, "TERRI/TERRY LEE: The son of Rebecca Lee." Shouldn't that be "daughter/son"?
 
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 11:49

Page 4, "in the middle of the forest. [...] one of you scouted the surrounding area with binoculars. About 800 meters down the road,"
I have trouble picturing this. I assume, it is not possible to have a line of sight of 800 meters in the middle of the forest. Also the map on page 5 shows that the longest path of vision to the tent is maybe 100m. Which wouldn't require a binocular to spot an orange tent anyway, I guess.
 
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 13:39

Page 10, "There are three ways for the PCs to locate this temporary base of operations for the Wolves:" errrr, they also could just follow the road!?
 
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 13:40

Page 16, the THE WOLVES table has no header for column 2.
 
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Re: TWDU Wolves' Den Beta Feedback

Sat 27 May 2023, 13:47

Page 10, "to spill about Evergreen": I am not a native English speaker. Is this a common idiom or slang, then fine. I had expected "speak about" or "talk about".

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