The text box “Korinthia Dead” on page 14 misspells Dekamedo as “Dekemedo.”
The map on page 156-157 misspells “edible” as “edibel.”
On page 144, final paragraph of “Aluin’s Powers,” the “if” after “However…” should not be capitalized.
On page 140, the section “Esmerelda’s Artifacts” starts with some extra letters in the first word, which should just be “We.”
Page 132 (“Undead Templars”) states that there are 54 templars plus Alisabeta Vearra (55 total), but page 134 (“The Calm Before the Storm”) puts the count at 53. Page 168 references 54 Templars (plus presumably Alisabeta for a total of 55).
At least one word (possibly “The”) is missing from “The Throne Beast” section, paragraph 2, right before the word “armor” on page 132.
Vindel’s questions on page 116 (“The Welcome”) should be separated by question marks rather than commas: “Who are you? What do you want from us? What’s your purpose here?”
The word "goroth" is inconsistently capitalized (sometimes uppercase, sometimes lowercase) on page 92 ("The Heart" paragraphs 2 versus 3).
A period is best on page 20 between the words “...county capital of Kalfas” and “it is also said…” (in the section "Achievements").
On page 108, the section “Aon Aarou,” paragraph 4 should have the second word “Vigilant” italicized. Likewise, paragraph 2 of “The Dust Cloud” should have “Vigilant” italicized too.
On page 114, in the section “Factions,” there should be an “and” between “berries” and “...feed and slaughter animals.”