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Dragonbane BETA v3 Adventure Book Feedback - Chapter 4 Journeys

Posted: Fri 17 Feb 2023, 17:14
by Tomas
Hi!

Please use this thread to post feedback and report any typos or errors in Chapter 4 of the new Beta PDF (dated Feb 17) of the Adventure Book for Dragonbane. Guidelines to remember:
  • Before reporting an error, please check and see if it already has been reported, and if so, don't report it again.
  • If you feedbacked on something in a previous Beta but it's not changed in the new Beta, it's not because we missed it - it's because we made a different assessment. (Typos are a different thing.)
Please report your feedback no later than February 28.
Thank you!

Re: Dragonbane BETA v3 Adventure Book Feedback - Chapter 4 Journeys

Posted: Thu 23 Feb 2023, 00:59
by blueman01
Page 28 - "These pour souls" = "poor"

Page 29: Tylos is a member of the "Watchers of the Immaculate Flame" - should it be Keepers of the Immaculate Flame?

Page 31: "and spends" = and spend