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Hi!

Please use this thread to post feedback and report any typos or errors in Chapter 3 of the new Beta PDF (dated Feb 17) of the Adventure Book for Dragonbane. Guidelines to remember:

• Before reporting an error, please check and see if it already has been reported, and if so, don't report it again.
• If you feedbacked on something in a previous Beta but it's not changed in the new Beta, it's not because we missed it - it's because we made a different assessment. (Typos are a different thing.)

Please report your feedback no later than February 28.
Thank you!

Page 21 and Page 22: Alfilia is a knight from the Watchers of the Immaculate Flame - Page 21 (or sent by the Watchers of the Immaculate Flame - Page 22) - should it be Keepers of the Immaculate Flame? (Page 9 - she is from the Keepers of the Immaculate Flame).

Page 27. The last bulleted item under "10. The Crypt of Um-Durman." The first sentence describes Um-Durman and in parentheses states "see image on page XX." The illustration is on the same page as this text. I'd suggest deleting this parenthetical reference and simply labeling the illustration as "Um-Durman".