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Marco Rafalà
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Fri 07 Oct 2022, 22:15

Typo -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | THE BUNKER, page 73.

The typo is in #6 of the Countdown. Second to last sentence.
A huge fight it about to explode.
The word it should be changed to is in this sentence.

Correction:
A huge fight is about to explode.
 
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Fri 07 Oct 2022, 22:32

Typo -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | THE BUNKER, page 78.

Under Jan. First paragraph, second sentence.
There’s a story they tell of two Spetsnaz passing though town who started something at The Bunker.


The word though should be through.

Corrected:
There’s a story they tell of two Spetsnaz passing through town who started something at The Bunker.
 
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Fri 07 Oct 2022, 22:36

Word Missing -- APPENDIX 1 | KRAKOW, page 79.

First paragraph, last sentence.
Yet in year 2000 the great cities of the world are dead museums.
Correction:
Yet in the year 2000 the great cities of the world are dead museums.
 
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Fri 07 Oct 2022, 22:44

Typo -- APPENDIX 1 | KRAKOW, page 80.

Under Arrival. Second paragraph, second sentence.
Walking in, especially at night, is relatively easily but the People’s Militia may at any time stop someone for ID.
The word easily should be changed to easy.

Correction:
Walking in, especially at night, is relatively easy but the People’s Militia may at any time stop someone for ID.
 
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Fri 07 Oct 2022, 23:51

Typo -- APPENDIX 1 | KRAKOW, page 84.

Under ZUZANNA ZIELIŃKSA. Second paragraph, second sentence.
A true patriot, Zuzanna belies in a free city and a free Poland.
Correction:
A true patriot, Zuzanna believes in a free city and a free Poland.
 
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Fri 07 Oct 2022, 23:56

Appendix 1 and throughout: you refer to the city as "Krakow", rather than using the Polish spelling of "Kraków" (which you have used elsewhere for Polish place names) or the Americanised "Cracow". The Polish spelling would be perfectly correct, consistent with the pronunciation and the rest of the Polish place and people's names used (e.g. p82 Ludwinów) ... and infinitely preferable.
 
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Fri 07 Oct 2022, 23:58

TYPO - Appendix 1 - Kraków, p.82
OLD TOWN (STARE MIASTRO)
Old Town in Polish is "Stare Miasto".

This is also repeated on the maps.
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Sat 08 Oct 2022, 00:01

Typo -- APPENDIX 1 | KRAKOW, page 83.

Last two sentences under Hotel Krakow.
And the beds are still far more comfortable than most soldiers have bunked in forages. This is as close to the Ritz as one is like to see these days.
Correction:
And the beds are still far more comfortable than most soldiers have bunked in for ages. This is as close to the Ritz as one is likely to see these days.
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Sat 08 Oct 2022, 00:03

TYPO - Appendix 1 - Kraków - p.82

More Polish place names:
NORTHWEST ABANDONED DISTRICTS
CZARNA WIES, NOWA WIES
These are "Czarna Wieś" and "Nowa Wieś".

These are also repeated on the maps.
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Sat 08 Oct 2022, 00:08

TYPOS - Appendix 1 - Kraków - p.82
WAWEL CASTLE
Wawel Castle is the last of many fortifications located on a limestone hill in Old Town. Restored in this century before the war, the museum is once again a fortress for elements of the Free Polish 6th Brigade, People’s Militia, and members of the city council, mostly while in session. Parapets and towers evoke centuries old sieges and the cries of battle as brutal and primitive as any seen today. Man, it seems, has not gone so far as he thought. Of par- ticular interest is a helicopter which takes off from the courtyard. It is a Mil Mi-24. See the page 84.
Should be: "located on a limestone hill in the Old Town" and "See page 84."
Also, would it not be more appropriate to say that the helicopter is "based" in the courtyard? After all, it can take off from anywhere.
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