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Oddly Worded Sentence -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | BIG PLAYGROUND, page 58.

This is in the second sentence under BLOCK BUSTA VIDEO.

Citizens of Big Playground can rent TVs if they don’t have one or VCRs here.

Revised:

Citizens of Big Playground can rent TVs and VCRs here if they don’t have these items.

Typo -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | BIG PLAYGROUND, page 60.

The typo is in the third sentence under GANGER.

The shoot when told.

The word The should be They.

Corrected:

They shoot when told.

Typo -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | THE CHURCH, page 62.

The typo is the in the first sentence under OVERVIEW.

At the end of the streets stands a Gothic-style church.

The word streets should be singular.

Corrected:

At the end of the street stands a Gothic-style church.

Typo -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | THE CHURCH, page 62.

The typo is in second sentence in #4 of the COUNTDOWN.

While it cannot be directly died to him, Velky accuses him of doing so.

The word died should be tied.

Corrected:

While it cannot be directly tied to him, Velky accuses him of doing so.

Strange Phrasing -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | THE CHURCH, page 64.

The first sentence under CATACOMBS is oddly phrased.

The original structure was built over catacombs dating back at least to the 1300s if not further.

Revised:

The original structure was built on top of catacombs dating back at least to the 1300s if not earlier.

TYPO - Chapter 6 - Scenario Sites, page 54:

The PC’s hear Radio Free Europe when near Big Playground. They may decide to check it out and follow the signal.

There is no possessive apostrophe in the plural of PC. It should read "PCs".

Strange Phrasing -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | THE POWER PLANT, page 67.

In the Locations section, under Auxiliary Buildings, this sentence is oddly phrased.

This building holds the offices, showers, cafeteria, and other practical employee needs of the facility.

Revised:

This building holds the offices, showers, cafeteria, and other practical facilities for employees at the power plant.

Strange Phrasing -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | THE POWER PLANT, page 71.

The sentence in question is the last last sentence in the second paragraph under MASHA SYMAŃSKA

Coupled with her jealousy over leadership, she’s starting to doubt the peace and prosperity message of The Sanctuary applies to the world anymore.

Revised for clarity:

Coupled with her jealousy over leadership, she’s starting to doubt The Sanctuary's message of peace and prosperity applies to the world anymore.

Word Missing & Word Order Issue -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | THE POWER PLANT, page 71.

A word is missing in the final sentence under MASHA SYMAŃSKA. Also there is a word order problem.

Masha has long, dark eyes hair and stands about five foot five.

Correction:

Masha has long, dark hair and eyes and stands about five foot five.

Typo -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | THE BUNKER, page 73.

The typo is under Arrival, in the fourth sentence of the first paragraph.

The interior is lit with old neon and a cheap club lasers.

Since page 75 states there is only one laser, the word lasers here should be singular.

Corrected:

The interior is lit with old neon and a cheap club laser.