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Hello Mattias,
here is my feedback, possible corrections in bold :
Call of the Dark

Page 2, summary starts bottom left with a lonely ‘The Ambrian Realm’, not sure if it is intended ;
Page 5, last § : ‘see page XX and XX’. I think the page # should be known now ;
Page 10, The Father’s anguish, 3rd § : ‘darkness came for them as it had so many others.’, missing ‘for so many others’
Page 11, Chronolgy § : ‘under the Fortune Hunter heading on page XX)’.
Page 18, Irena Sarli, 2nd § : ‘see the handout of Irena’s map on page XX.‘
Page 19, Irena’s stat block :
Skills : History +4 : for the other skills the Proficiency Bonus is +2, and the Int modifier is +0, shouldn’t it be +2 ?
Actions : Bluetongue, ends with « Paralyze: see page XX. »
Page 23 : the comment next to the player map « map of Sarli on page XX of this book. »
Page 37 : the comment next to the monastery chronicle and Lyra symbol shows « on page XX ».
2nd § « the Monastery’s Chronicle (see handout on page XX) », « see Appendix, page XX ».
The Reliquary, 3rd § « Argondin’s Bane (see Appendix, page XX) »
Page 39, Kraal stat block : saving throws shouldn’t it be Str +10, Dex +10, Con +11, Wis +8
Page 42, Overview : « leads up to the entrance facing southeast. » Isn’t it southwest on the map p.43 ?

Retribution
p.52, The Maretko Family : « has become increasingly lucrative, why the Valotzars and Maretkos », missing « this is why » ?
p.64, The Missing Spy, 1st § : « suffering the effects of Sleep Deprivation (see page XX) »
Questions about Belraya, 2nd § : « What happens then is described on page XX »
p.66, 3rd § : « see Asorio’s Store on page XX »
A Visit to the Water Hole, last § : « he heading Ilonor Picks Up the Trail (page XX) »
p.67, The Goblin Camp : penultimate § « see King Koriano’s Shipyard on page XX »
Ultimate § « see Peat Hill on page XX and Meeting Yndlas on page XX »
p.70, Asorio’s Store, last § « see Firodon Kalalti on page XX »
p.71, What he has to say, § before the note : « The text is available as a handout on page XX »
p.72, In Belraya’s tracks, 1st § : « or Doing Nothing on page XX »
p.75, Firodon Kalalti, last § : « see Ilonor Picks Up the Trail on page XX »
Next to the picture of the journal : « You can find the journal exerpt on page XX »
p.76, Strike, 2nd § : « under Time Is Running Out, page XX », and « known as Blackslash (page XX) »
p.77, Blackslash stat block :Assassin’s Blade and Hand Crossbow, it says « optionally 14 (4d6) poison damage » for both weapons. I suppose « optionally » means « if Blackslash chooses », but maybe it should be specified if it comes from Blackslash ability to poison its blade or bolts with some poison doses available, or if it is a magical weapon that inflicts such damages (in such case it is very powerful as there is no save against poison, and the players will want it).
p.78, The High Road, 2nd § : « see page XX for rules on sleep deprivation »
p.79, Varkon’s Vandals, 1st § : « under Ilonor Picks up the Trail on page XX »
p.82, Leg 2 Haraag - Mederen : the distance is in kilometers while all others are in miles.
p.85, Blight-born Laranod stat block, Saving Throws Str should be +13, Dex +10, Con +10, Wis +8

Fantastic, thanks!
/MJH