I hope feedback on the English version is okay. Answering in Swedish is fine, I can read it just fine but I can't type it.
Some questions and quirks that I noticed in the Quickstart. Obviously for a Quickstart, some of these may be simplifications or omissions that are covered in the full book.
If any of the suggestions are stupid, ignore them
Page 8
Clarification
Opposed rolls does not explain what happens if both succeed and the score is a draw.
Clarification
Pushed rolls. It says only the active party can push. Does this mean a character cannot push when attempting to dodge an attack for example?
Page 9
Suggestion
The conditions feel off to me.
Dazed and Exhausted feels like they should be swapped (becoming exhausted after a feat of strength or dazed after pushing my agility)
Becoming “sickly” sounds my character got infected. I would use “Weak” instead.
Dirty seems silly. I would replace with something like Nervous.
Likewise, I would replace Scared with “Insecure” or similar.
Page 12
Wording:
The description at the top says I can forego my action to dash, but in the list below, dash IS an action.
Contradiction:
The rules for reactions say a free attack is a reaction (which uses your action) but p.14 says it does not.
Clarification:
Can I opt to move but not take an action in order to parry or dodge later in the turn? As written, it does not appear to be possible.
The most obvious example would be if I go first and want to block an enemy from moving to attack my friends.
Using an ability is an action. The Protector ability for the knight specifically says it does not require an action, but the thief Backstab does not say this (making the ability unusable as written since you cannot take two actions in one turn)
Page 13
Clarification:
Unless it is covered in the main rules, it is unclear what effects being prone or crouching have, since standing is a free action and it does not appear to affect combat.
Page 14
Clarification:
Can I attack diagonally?
Page 15
Clarification:
If I roll a 1 and take the extra attack, do I get a third attack if I am lucky enough to roll another 1?
What happens if a damaged weapon is damaged?
Does the counterattack when rolling a 1 to parry get the Dragon benefits or is it just a hit?
Shields are discussed under the Parrying section. Does a 1 when parrying with a shield grant a counter attack and if so with the shield or my weapon?
Dodging leaves me prone but prone seems to have no effect on combat or enemies attacking me?
Page 16
Clarification:
If I take cover, how long does that last?
Page 17:
Are you sure?
I can put on or take off a suit of plate armor in 10 seconds while moving?
Clarification:
Do I have to be Rallied every round or is a single success enough for multiple rounds?
Page 25:
Clarification:
Resistance rolls against spells are alluded to but it is unclear how that works.
Fireball says “as a ranged attack”. Can it be dodged?
Page 28:
Correction:
Spider attacks entry 3. “A CON roll must be made at each turn” should probably read “at the end of each turn” ?
Page 32
Clarification:
Lady attacks entry 4. “With a penalty to the WIL roll” should probably say “with a bane”.
Page 33:
Death knight attacks entry 4 “Suffer weapon damage” reads like it damages the characters weapon.
Entry 6 “with a penalty to the WIL roll”. As above.
Character sheets
Orla character sheet:
“As an elf you can mediate”. Should probably say “meditate”.
“You cann command” typo.
Makander character sheet:
Ill tempered ducks is classic but having an ability that requires the group to use an option rule feels like the option isn’t optional at all.
The protector ability says we both have to be in melee combat with the same enemy. Is this defined strictly as within 2 meters or does our actions matter? My wizard friend may not have engaged in a melee attack at all.
Krisanna character sheet:
The same question arises with the backstab ability. I would suggest omitting the “melee combat” wording and using something like “if both characters are within 2 meters of the same enemy”.
The inevitable question for backstab: If I roll a dragon how many dice of damage do I get?
Bastonn character sheet:
The Hunting Instincts ability needs to state that it does not require an action in order for the attack portion of it to be usable.