1. On page 1, the player characters section mentions that Holroyd is an android, but the "normal android rules" that this section says should apply are not explained in the module or in the starter rules booklet. Could these rules be added to one or both of the booklets?
2. Also on page 1, in the "What's the Story, Mother?" box text, the first sentence is missing the word "a" between "Hadley's Hope is" and "'shake and bake' terraforming".
3. On page 2, in the "Xenomorphs" box text:
- The second sentence has an unnecessary space in the middle of the word "and".
- The bullet point for the Xenomorph Drone in Tannen's Casino reads like the name of an area has been omitted and replaced with only a page number placeholder (i.e., "... trying to break through the door to the xx where Wes Osterman is hiding").
4. On page 6, in the "Secret Exit" section, the first sentence has an unnecessary space in the word "duct".
5. On page 7, in the "Storage Rooms" section, the symbol for a 6 has been replaced by "YY" by mistake.
7. On page 16, in the Xenomorph's "Speed" section, the last sentence explains that "the Xenomorph may either perform one signature attack or move (below)", but the only information directly below this paragraph is the d6 table for what incapacitated Xenormorphs might do. The word "below" should be replaced with "adjacent", unless the layout changes in the final version.
7. Several rules are referred to throughout the Xenomorphs section which are absent from the adventure module, the starter set rules booklet, or both:
- Page 16: The "Movement" paragraph, as well as the "Wounded" and "Desperate Escape" entries in the "Incapacitated Xenomorph" table mention leaving combat. The final page reference should point towards the appropriate page in the rules booklet, to make it clear that this rule is not found in the adventure module.
- Page 17: The final paragraph of the "Acid Splash" section instructs the reader to "see page xx for typical armor levels" when acid splashes on the floor of a building or ship. However, it is unclear which page in the rules booklet this is referring to, as the "Typical Barriers" box that provides armor levels for bulkheads, etc. doesn't mention floors or ceilings. Maybe it should, so all the armor level guides can be found in one place?
- Page 18: The Facehugger Attacks, "Face Grapple" and "The Final Embrace" explain that it's possible to defend against these attacks. The final page reference should point towards the appropriate page in the rules booklet, to make it clear that this rule is not found in the adventure module.
- Page 19: The Chestburster Attack, "Terrorising Hiss" mentions what an Imp would do instead on a roll of 4, but this module contains no references to other Xenomorph varieties like the Praetomorph, so no Imps actually appear in this story. Is this reference necessary here?
- Page 19: The Chestburster Attack, "Leg Slash" mentions the busted knee serious injury, providing a page reference. However, the serious injuries table mentioned here (and mentioned in the starter rules booklet) is never presented in full in either book. Could this be added to the starter rules booklet?
- Page 20: The Drone attack, "Headbite" mentions the ovomorphing process, but no details are provided in the adventure module or the starter set rules booklet about this process, despite the page number reference. Could a short blurb be added to this module to briefly explain this process?
