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Page 79, Chapter cover page:

It declares this is Chapter 4, but the prior chapter was Chapter 4 and the following page chapter headers say Chapter 5.

Page 79, first segment:

"Birds have trans
formed the art of exploring ruins, so much so that few can"

The word "transformed" splits at "trans" and is continued on the next column. There should be a hyphen after trans. "trans- formed".

Page 79, under A Brief History of the Garuda:

" encountered in in a sealed pod "

Delete one "in".

Page 80, under The Birds and the City:

"However there is one place more associ-
ated with the Garuda than anywhere else and that is the Bird
Market located in XX. "

I assume the "XX" is a placeholder for a location name?

Page 80, under A Valuable Companion:

"Some speculate that the free
birds have developed some kind of distributed mass intel-
ligence, but no one knows for sure."

Based on other usages of these Birds, the "B" should be capitalized in "free Birds".

Page 84, under Dimensional Flitting:

"The portal lasts for just one round, and anyone
object the size of a human or smaller can pass through – including the Bird itself."

It looks like "anyone" should just be "any".

Page 84, under Enshroud:

"The Bird envelops an Explorer in a protective
field, fully protecting them the Blight for one stretch. The
power can be used as a reaction against or a Blight attack.

A couple of things:
1. Looks like "from" needs to be added after "them".
2. It looks like there was supposed to be something between "against" and "or a Blight attack".

Page 88, first line:

"Ship City’s sprawling, crowded workshops where craftsmen cob-
ble together essential equipment from scavenged parts."

Looks like "in" needs to be inserted before "Ship City's".

Page 92, under Ranged Weapon Type, Coiler:

" They the derivatives of the Heirloom accelerator weapons"

It looks like this is missing a word(s) between "They" and "the". I'm guessing it is meant to be, "They are the derivatives".

Page 31

"FUSILLARD PROTECTOR
Protection was your life. You provided it directly by shielding your protege from attacks by malicious thugs, wrecker crews, or even worse, or indirectly by eliminating"

protégé is missing it's accents