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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:07
by MidnightBlue
Page 65, Critical Injuries table, roll result 63, severed arm:

"Permament"

Typo: should be "Permanent".

Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:11
by MidnightBlue
Page 66, under Suffering Despair:

"as indiciated by the GM or the adventure."

Typo: should be "indicated".

Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:13
by MidnightBlue
Page 66, under Recovering Hope - A Friendly Voice:

"Hope this in this way"

The first instance of "this" needs to be deleted.

Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:17
by MidnightBlue
Page 66, under Healing Trauma:

"you can make empathy roll each week to recover from it"

Looks like there should be an "an" after "make".

Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:34
by MidnightBlue
Page 69, under Recovering Heart:

" Only broken victims can recover Heart this in this way."

Delete the first instance of "this".

Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:43
by MidnightBlue
Page 70, under Vacuum:

"Continue to make strength rolls
on evert turn, now unmodified. "

Typo: should be "every".

Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:46
by MidnightBlue
Page 70, under Explosive Decompression:

" If the bulkhead of a spaceship fails, The air will vent out"

Typo: the capital "T" in "The air" should be a lower-case "t".

Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 08:01
by MidnightBlue
Page 73, under Space Movement:

"A segment can be dozens or of kilometers across."

Looks like "or" needs to be deleted.

Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 08:12
by MidnightBlue
Page 74, under Field Repair:

" An engine or vehicle weapon disabled by critical damage can hastily repaired by a vehicle engineer"

Looks like "be" should be added after "can". "critical damage can be hastily"

Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread

Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 08:16
by MidnightBlue
Page 74, under Docking:

"This action can only be attempted a spaceship and if the target ship is at Engaged range."

Looks like "if" needs to be moved to before "a spaceship". "if a spaceship and the target ship"