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Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:07
by MidnightBlue
Page 65, Critical Injuries table, roll result 63, severed arm:
"Permament"
Typo: should be "Permanent".
Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:11
by MidnightBlue
Page 66, under Suffering Despair:
"as indiciated by the GM or the adventure."
Typo: should be "indicated".
Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:13
by MidnightBlue
Page 66, under Recovering Hope - A Friendly Voice:
"Hope this in this way"
The first instance of "this" needs to be deleted.
Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:17
by MidnightBlue
Page 66, under Healing Trauma:
"you can make empathy roll each week to recover from it"
Looks like there should be an "an" after "make".
Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:34
by MidnightBlue
Page 69, under Recovering Heart:
" Only broken victims can recover Heart this in this way."
Delete the first instance of "this".
Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:43
by MidnightBlue
Page 70, under Vacuum:
"Continue to make strength rolls
on evert turn, now unmodified. "
Typo: should be "every".
Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 07:46
by MidnightBlue
Page 70, under Explosive Decompression:
" If the bulkhead of a spaceship fails, The air will vent out"
Typo: the capital "T" in "The air" should be a lower-case "t".
Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 08:01
by MidnightBlue
Page 73, under Space Movement:
"A segment can be dozens or of kilometers across."
Looks like "or" needs to be deleted.
Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 08:12
by MidnightBlue
Page 74, under Field Repair:
" An engine or vehicle weapon disabled by critical damage can hastily repaired by a vehicle engineer"
Looks like "be" should be added after "can". "critical damage can be hastily"
Re: ALPHA Feedback Thread
Posted: Tue 24 Dec 2024, 08:16
by MidnightBlue
Page 74, under Docking:
"This action can only be attempted a spaceship and if the target ship is at Engaged range."
Looks like "if" needs to be moved to before "a spaceship". "if a spaceship and the target ship"