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I hope Free League will read all comments thorolly before printing; some of the reported mistakes are reoccuring from the ALPHA feedback.

Page 226:

• "...to neutralize rival Explorer Guild crews and remove..." - Shouldn't it be Explorers Guild?

Page 228:
Construct types
Custodians

• "Often seem to maintain, clean, or repair the ruins." - Should it be seen instead of seem?

Page 230:
Glyph Golem

• The text says explorer and explorers instead of Explorer and Explorers.

Page 234:

• "Niebas are denizens of deep and a truly alien spaces..." - Should either be "deep and truly alien spaces", or "a deep and truly alien space".

Page 239:

• "Even a Greathips can be forced out of the Slipstream by a Gravity Tide." - Misspelled Greatship

Page 240:

• "Crane rat" should be Crane Rat.

• "Cultural savant 1" should be Cultural Savant 1.

Pages 212-213:
Delve Hazards table.

Sometimes it says "Roll", other times "Roll for". I think it looks better if you choose one or the other instead of both.

For example Obscuring Haze says "Roll for PERCEPTION", while Dislodged Boulder says "Roll AGILITY".

This was pointed out in the alpha, did you add the latest version of the delving chapter to the beta PDF?

I hope Free League will read all comments thorolly before printing; some of the reported mistakes are reoccuring from the ALPHA feedback.

I also noticed that.

• pg. 19: "Your origin will give you one talent (at level 1), an associated faction, and a contact in the place you grew up." Associated seems bolded unnecessarily.

• pg. 27: "You may wonder what your Bird looks like and what its name is?" Should not be phrased as a question.

• pg. 29: "Did the crew give or be promised a favor from a faction?". Awkward phrasing, grammar. Suggested: "Did the crew give or get promised a favor from a faction?"

• pg. 49: Open Rolls. The heading for open rolls doesn't seem informative, since there is no other mention of open rolls in the text. Either a different header, or no header, might be clearer.

• pg. 53: Hardened. "Roll base dice equal to the talent level when suffering Blight (after rolling for Blight protection). For each (six) rolled, ignore one point of Blight." I don't see the purpose in rolling this talent after Blight Protection, rather than just adding this talent's rank, as base dice, to Blight Protection rolls or other instances when taking Blight Damage. This would save time from making separate rolls, and simplify the mechanic. (The only instance I can see is taking Blight Damage when Protection doesn't apply, like being Out of Supply, but making two separate rolls in other instances seems tedious).

• pg. 62 + 63: Both attack flowcharts say "Make a straight (STRENGTH/AGILITY) roll with a gear bonus for your weapon." "Straight" rolls are used only in one other context (pg. 65 for Social Combat), but otherwise are not explained. It might be clearer to only specify opposed rolls, and for all other rolls to consistently just be called STRENGTH rolls, etc.

• pg. 64: Friendly Fire. Rules clarification: Does friendly fire risk hitting other enemies? Only firing at someone engaged with "another character" is mentioned, but not another ally or player character. Not sure if this is an intended effect.

• pg. 67: Conditions. "In Coriolis: The Great Dark critical injuries, mental trauma injuries (page XX), and Blight manifestations...". Needs comma after "In Coriolis: The Great Dark".

• pg. 71: Fire Crits. " Instead, if you are broken by fire damage, or suffer fire damage when already broken, you must make a death save on your turn every round until you die or you are saved by a first aid action." Death Save is not a term otherwise in this rulebook, so it's unclear what is meant to be rolled. Perhaps AGILITY each round until dead?

Not sure if this is an spelling mistake or a new item but on p.27 Keepsake 24: "Imago plate of a..."
I imagine it should be 'Image plate'.