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"The boss of this market
is a crafty criminal or simple an ingenious survivor who
controls illicit trade. Often, the black market is a necessity.
Ration cards rarely fulfill all needs"

should be " the boss of this market is a crafty criminal or simplY an ingenious survivor who controls THIS illicit trade. Often the black market is a necessity AS ration cards WILL rarely fulfill all needs

Guys, make sure to check if the feedback you're posting has already been posted.

I see a few double posts here.

from 01 the fire of civilisation

Before the war, historians and their like suggested the
first spark of civilization began, most probably, with the
birth of agriculture. The spark, in time, flared into the
crown jewel of human progress: the city. From Babylon,
to Rome, to New York, these towering edifices and conurbations were the high-water mark of human achievement.

Before the war, historians and their like suggested the
first spark of civilization most probably began with the
birth of agriculture. That spark, in time, flared into the
crown jewels of human progress: the city. From Babylon,
to Rome, to New York, these towering edifices and conurbations were the pinnacle of human achievement.

TYPO -- Chapter 4 CITY FACTIONS, Page 37 | VLADIMIR BASAYEV

The first sentence in the final paragraph under the description for Vladimir Basayev

Basayev is overweight, balding, a lick of hair constantly pasted across the broad expanse of his bar skull.

The word bar should be bare

Corrected:

Basayev is overweight, balding, a lick of hair constantly pasted across the broad expanse of his bare skull.

TYPO -- Chapter 4 CITY FACTIONS, Page 36 | THE VOROVSKOY MIR

The typo is in the last sentence of the final paragraph just above the GOALS section.

There’s little chance any traitor selling secrets will ever face consequences and, really, to whom and what is their left to be loyal?

The word their should be there

Corrected:

There’s little chance any traitor selling secrets will ever face consequences and, really, to whom and what is there left to be loyal?

Hit Capacity seems to have errors with a large number of NPCs. Lots of STR C, AGI C ranked NPCs are shown as having a 6 for Hit Cap when it should be 4. (I am correct in thinking it is the max score for each die divided by 4? So C + C / 4 should be 8+8(16)/4 = 4 right?)

Format Issue -- Chapter 5 URBAN PLOTS | OPERATION RESET, page 51

In the Countdown, the final "starred" bullet pointed texted is not actually part of the plot's countdown and should not be in the countdown list.

That concludes Operation Reset for this module. The plot will continue in the future expansions Hostile Waters and Operation Reset.

Typo -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | BIG PLAYGROUND, page 54.

The typo in at the top of the page in the second sentence.

Now, gangs run the territory but there’s thing you can get here not found anywhere else.

The word there's should be there are and thing should be plural.

Corrected:

Now, gangs run the territory but there are things you can get here not found anywhere else.

Typo -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | BIG PLAYGROUND, page 54.

The typo is in the first sentence of the third paragraph under THE SITUATION.

One is known as the East Gang, also knowns as The Rooks, and is led by Big Gaz.

The word knowns should not be plural.

Corrected:

One is known as the East Gang, also known as The Rooks, and is led by Big Gaz.

Typo -- Chapter 6 SCENARIO SITES | BIG PLAYGROUND, page 58.

The typo is in the second sentence under BIG GAZ’S PAD.

He has the top floor of the easternmost tower all too himself and his bodyguards and hangers-on.

The word too should be to.

Corrected:

He has the top floor of the easternmost tower all to himself and his bodyguards and hangers-on.