Thanks for the notes, i'll try and update the doc with your suggestions.This is great! I'll be printing a few copies for our upcoming campaign.
One suggestion: For the "Defence" table, it might be nice to include a Disarm column, and parrying a ranged attack with a weapon should maybe have an asterisk, since it can be done with Rank 2 in the associated weapon talent.
Also, minor note, in the Actions tables, you denote actions that can be performed while Prone with an asterisk, but you don't do so for the "Get Up" action. Not that anyone should be confused by that, but just in case you're a stickler for consistency. There's also a typo in the passage on negative dice: "subtract negative [sixes] form positive [sixes]".