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tallknight
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Re: Urban Operations Early Access Feedback

Thu 06 Oct 2022, 16:49

I preordered and received the email with the link, however when I CLICK on the link and it goes to DriveThruRPG, it gives me an error saying discount was used max number of times, so it didn't give me the pdf.

I emailed the support email.
 
Oddball_E8
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Re: Urban Operations Early Access Feedback

Thu 06 Oct 2022, 18:14

Maybe it's best to let people comment about not getting the PDF here for now and then clean up the thread when things cool down?

But this is all very off topic for the thread.
 
Marco Rafalà
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Re: Urban Operations Early Access Feedback

Thu 06 Oct 2022, 18:55

TYPO -- Page 8 under Black Market:

Most cities have a black market. The boss of this market is a crafty criminal or simple an ingenious survivor who controls illicit trade.
Simple should be simply

Corrected:

Most cities have a black market. The boss of this market is a crafty criminal or simply an ingenious survivor who controls illicit trade.
 
Marco Rafalà
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Re: Urban Operations Early Access Feedback

Thu 06 Oct 2022, 19:05

TYPO -- Page 9, Second Sentence in final paragraph under POLITICS AND POWER

A lot of people thought the apocalypse would bring nothing but strongmen like in a post-apocalyptic films.
The word, films, should be singular: film

Corrected:

A lot of people thought the apocalypse would bring nothing but strongmen like in a post-apocalyptic film.
 
Marco Rafalà
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Re: Urban Operations Early Access Feedback

Thu 06 Oct 2022, 20:53

TYPO -- City Rules chapter, Page 16. The second sentence in the OVERWATCH section.

As the enemy has zero visibility beyond their own hex, your will be able to fire at the moment they enter your hex.
The word, your, should be you. Also, the word at can be omitted.

Corrected:

As the enemy has zero visibility beyond their own hex, you will be able to fire the moment they enter your hex.
 
Marco Rafalà
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Re: Urban Operations Early Access Feedback

Thu 06 Oct 2022, 21:43

TYPO, Word missing -- City Rules chapter, Page 18. The last sentence in the first "bullet" starred part under ENDING THE ENGAGEMENT.

Note that moving out of sector with an active enemy does not require a retreat action if you are not in a close combat engagement.
the bold part should read out of a sector

Corrected:

Note that moving out of a sector with an active enemy does not require a retreat action if you are not in a close combat engagement.
 
Marco Rafalà
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Re: Urban Operations Early Access Feedback

Thu 06 Oct 2022, 22:07

TYPO -- Word Missing -- City Rules chapter | City Travel, Page 21. The first sentence under BACKING OFF is missing a word.

When backing off from an encounter after a successful RECON roll (page 143 in the Player’s Manual) on a city map, you need to immediately move back out the hex with your next move, or you will be spotted.


The bold part should read move back out of the hex

Corrected:

When backing off from an encounter after a successful RECON roll (page 143 in the Player’s Manual) on a city map, you need to immediately move back out of the hex with your next move, or you will be spotted.

Note, the final sentence uses this same phrase "back out of the hex" so this correction makes the language consistent and easier to read.
 
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Ser Stevos
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Re: Urban Operations Early Access Feedback

Thu 06 Oct 2022, 22:28

TYPO -- misspelling -- Krakow appendix I, General Antoni Lis pg 85

"In 1989, Poland became independent, but Lis never believed that meant piece." Piece replaced with peace.
 
Marco Rafalà
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Re: Urban Operations Early Access Feedback

Thu 06 Oct 2022, 22:47

TYPO -- Chapter 3 Urban Encounters | List of Encounters, Page 26 | Robbery encounter

Some thugs (gang members) are beating an unarmed man who tries do hold them off.
DO should be TO -- this error is also on the PDF of the Card.

Corrected:

Some thugs (gang members) are beating an unarmed man who tries to hold them off.
Last edited by Marco Rafalà on Thu 06 Oct 2022, 23:05, edited 1 time in total.
 
Marco Rafalà
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Re: Urban Operations Early Access Feedback

Thu 06 Oct 2022, 23:04

TYPO -- Chapter 3 Urban Operations | List of Encounters, Page 30 | Street Preacher encounter
A man dressed in medieval-looking garb stands on a box in the street and screams the prophecy of the The Shepherd’s Flock (page 62 of the Referee’s Manual).
Extra word in bold above. This is also on the PDF of the card. Here are two alternatives at correction:

Option one

A man dressed in medieval-looking garb stands on a box in the street and screams the prophecy of The Shepherd’s Flock (page 62 of the Referee’s Manual).

Option two

A man dressed in medieval-looking garb stands on a box in the street and screams The Shepherd's Flock prophecy (page 62 of the Referee’s Manual).
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