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Beta Feedback - City of My Nightmares

Wed 18 Jun 2025, 11:03

Hi!

Please use this thread to post feedback and report any typos or errors in the City of My Nightmares book for the Vaesen RPG, no later than July 1. Please note that page references (page xx) are not completed yet so please ignore these. The PDF files will be updated on DrivethruRPG to the final versions later. Before reporting an error, please check to see if it has already been reported. If so, don't report it again.

Thank you for your support!

P.S. This is the English version of the book. The Swedish version will be shared soon, but Swedish backers are most welcome to check the English PDF as well. Tack!
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Re: Beta Feedback - City of My Nightmares

Fri 20 Jun 2025, 01:52

It seems that "White Hills" is the translation chosen for the area of "Vita Bergen", but there are several instances where "Vita Bergen" still comes up.

pg. 19
Several girls from the slums of Vita Bergen have recently gone missing

pg. 34
Doctor Svärdh is an example to us all – he goes to Vita Bergen every day to care for the sick.

Similarly, King's Garden is used, but on page 40 Kungsträdgården is still used.
The player characters can take the train to Stockholm and on to Strömkajen Quay at Kungsträdgården Park.

Page 65.
The first name of the coroner is written as "Elvira" instead of "Ester".
Coroner Elvira Volk has not been seen since...
 
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Re: Beta Feedback - City of My Nightmares

Fri 20 Jun 2025, 11:30

page 66:
word missing in sentence:
A spiral book chute runs through the entire the stairwell.
 
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Re: Beta Feedback - City of My Nightmares

Thu 26 Jun 2025, 11:52

From backer:

I've just looked through the City of My Nightmares and was just wondering if anyone else has noticed that the timelines of the mysteries don't line up - the first isn't given a date, but the second is set "Early summer" and states the first was recent but in August, the third is then autumn and 6 months after the second, and the fourth is late summer - but the 4 adventures are supposed to take place over a single year?
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Re: Beta Feedback - City of My Nightmares

Sat 28 Jun 2025, 19:17

Hi!

Please note that this thread is for City of My Nightmares, not Mythic Carpathia – the wrong link was initially included in the Kickstarter update. Sorry about that! The thread for reporting errors in Mythic Carpathia is here. Some posts initially made here have been moved over to the correct thread.
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