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p21 under Tugboat " carry a substantial number of sullies or passengers" presume this is meant to be "supplies".

Encounter Card: Poor Man's Dam [Ace/Diamonds] (PDF p. 35): In the last sentence, remove the superfluous comma after "(half a tank and one reload)".

p. 5: Change "you got it" to "you got it," (with added comma inside the double quotes). Add comma after "when I asked what".

p. 6, first column, first paragraph: Change "Mankind’s oldest highways: rivers, lakes, and the ocean become again the only reliable method of travel." to "Mankind‘s oldest highways—rivers, lakes, and the ocean—again become the only reliable method of travel." (changes underlined)

p. 8, second column, Pirates section, first paragraph: In the last sentence, change "Pirate of the Vistula" to "Pirates of the Vistula" and change "presences" to "presence" (changes underlined).

p. 8, second column, Pirates section, second paragraph: In the first sentence, add a comma after "the fortunate part". In the second sentence, change "of the pirate" to "of pirates" since the rest of the paragraph is talking about pirates in the plural.

Page 8, under the "Politics & Power" paragraph.

"Water barons are real. They control damns,-"

Change "damns" to dams.

Page 9 under the "The Historcal Role Of Waterways" subsection.

Paragraph 3:
"No matter where you game is set-"

Change "you" to 'your'.

Please add at least a couple of military hovercraft. Thank you.

The Sentinel virus on p. 89 has an unlikely incubation time of 1 shift. In practice that means that the infection will not be able to spread much, as people will fall ill before they manage to unknowingly pass it on. And most likely die, minimising the spread even further. But that might be intentional?