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Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Thu 05 Oct 2023, 11:49

Hi!

Please use this thread to post feedback and report any typos or errors in the PDF for the Building Better Worlds expansion. Please note:
  • Before reporting an error, please check to see if it has already been reported. If so, don't report it again.
  • Do not use this thread for discussions, only for direct feedback. If you want to discuss some topic you are welcome to start a new forum thread.
Please report your feedback no later than October 9.

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Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Thu 05 Oct 2023, 12:15

I'm skimming through the book now, and the first I noticed was a missing word in the description of the Hammerpede (page 120). There seems to be a missing word or line at the end of the description.
 
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Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Thu 05 Oct 2023, 13:38

on page 278 in the "planet personality" 27-30 isnt on the roll table
 
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Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Thu 05 Oct 2023, 14:23

Page 20 - 2033-1037 header should probably be 2033-2037
 
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Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Thu 05 Oct 2023, 15:05

The map of the Spinward Colonies is missing a t for Sanchez Outpost.
 
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Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Thu 05 Oct 2023, 15:37

Page 17, top box, section 2097-2099: “… Weyland Corps' stock … ” should be “… Weyland Corp's stock …”
 
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Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Thu 05 Oct 2023, 15:43

Page 18, section 2147-2151: “Alexandria succeeds from the 3WE” should read “Alexandria secedes from the 3WE”

Page 25, section 2147: same issue
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Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Thu 05 Oct 2023, 15:48

Page 19, section 2184-2186: “… they launch an offense to …” should read “… they launch an offensive to …”

Page 25, section 2186: same issue
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Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Thu 05 Oct 2023, 17:16

Page 19, the Black Gold Rush and The Fight For The Frontier sections are out of order. Black Gold Rush starts in 2181 and is first, The Fight For The Frontier starts in 2179 and is second.
 
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Re: Building Better Worlds PDF Feedback

Thu 05 Oct 2023, 19:21

Things I found on the maps that might be misses (nitpicks):

Page 203 (Map): The text "Access Doors" should be more centered in the "square". + The text "Airflow Louvers" should also be more centered.
Page 212 (Map): The map picture ends before the "frame", making a gap between the height lines and the frame.
Page 225 (Map): The top left "Landing strip" is cut off by the "Map Legend" box. + The text stroke color is a bit to green.
Page 252 (Map): The Height lines are missing. (between +0 to +100). + The text stroke color is a bit to green.

A fantastic job, the BBW module turned out splendid!

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