Thu 23 Feb 2023, 00:53
Page 11 - I had to go back and check the size of the statuette. Page 8: "The statuette of Emperor Eledain is roughly half a meter tall" (or about a foot and a half tall). "Each piece counts as a quarter of an item" On page 11 the goblins attack Weatherman: "have orders from the chieftain Maladûk to keep an eye out for a precious relic split into four smaller pieces. They have been told that this relic is
sought by many, both living and undead, and so the heavy bundle Weatherman was hauling around caught their attention." Hmmm - unless Weatherman has something else in that heavy bundle - each piece of the statuette is relatively tiny. Do we need to add something to the description of the statuette to indicate that it is tremendously heavy for its small size? We learn later (page 13) that it is made of Basalt. It would be good to mention this in the inset description of the statuette. Basalt is a heavy rock - but each individual piece would not constitute a 'heavy bundle'. Maybe they glimpsed his mark and decided to kill him??
Page 11 - "When the adventure begins, the player characters have been traveling for days through the high and rugged Kummer Mountains, trying to find a way down to the Misty Vale." the description of how the players are trying to get to the vale doesn't match with ox-drawn carts getting there. The session text is good though.
Page 12 - "worgriding" = worg riding
