Have only had time to read the first 15 pages of the Introduction and found two things:
- On p. 12 under The Spies, 9th line goes: "and transmitting the data to three waiting couriers vessels." I would think the word "couriers" should be "courier". The plural form of a courier vessel is courier vessels, not couriers vessels, AFAIK (big caveat, English is not my first language).
- On p. 13 in the Timeline sidebar the last item on the list has an "orphan" comma at the beginning of the third line. It should be at the end of the previous line.
- As an extra thing outside the Introduction that caught my eye while browsing the book, on p. 34 Table 06 the dice notation should be 1D66 (or D66) as the results are 11-66, not 2D6 (with results being 2-12).
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