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Re: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 6

Mon 27 Jun 2022, 21:09

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"Yet stray even a razor’s edge from the official Wallace narrative, and that razor will lash back straight for your throat."

Lash could in theory work here (very loosely, attacking/beating/retaliating), but with your use of the razor metaphor, I would propose slash as a more appropriate option. Lash is most often associated with something whip-like, not something razor-like.

"Yet stray even a razor’s edge from the official Wallace narrative, and that razor will slash back straight for your throat."

Possibly even:

"Yet stray even a razor’s edge from the official Wallace narrative, and that razor will slash straight back at your throat."
Before you use the word "XENOMORPH" again, you should read this article through:

https://www.wired.co.uk/article/aliens-throwaway-line-confusion

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