Page 91, column 2, replace “ton” with “to” in this part of the sentence: “...into the police station ton free Billy.“
Page 113, column 2, place a period after “good” in this part of the “Catastrophe” para: “...closing it for good Alternatively…”
Page 120, column 1, perhaps consider changing the name of the postmaster’s wife to something else? I could see my players becoming confused between the mine owner Myfanwy Thomas and the postmaster’s spouse Myfanwy Jeffreys. It will be simple enough for me to swap out the names in game prep or just refer to both as Mrs. Thomas and Mrs. Jeffreys, but I thought I’d suggest it for you to consider.
Page 123, column 2, change “they” to “the” in this sentence: “Taking care to stay out of sight, they coblynau…”
Page 124, column 1, change “that” to “than” in this sentence: “He remembers more of the story that Dai does…”
Page 125, column 1, change “they” to “the” at the beginning of this sentence: “They best way to do this…”
– Column 2, remove the second period from the end of this sentence: “out of operation permanently. .”
Page 134, column 2 the third clue: I don’t follow the logic between the removal of the iron fence and the connection to the fey aversion to Christianity, unless you add a detail that the wrought iron fence was topped with gilded crosses or such like. I defer to your bibliography but I believe the fey aversion to iron dated to pagan Iron Age beliefs later adapted by the church for its own purposes. I suggest it would be easier to change the text to note the fey aversion to iron, perhaps like this: “Astute characters will recognize the aversion to iron as common among fey…”
Page 136, column 2, change “on” to “in” in this sentence: “...spending a night on the cells…”