Here are my findings of things in Chapter 1 to 3.
You came walking from Alderland across the mountains in the south or riding from Aslene in the west, were put through the meat grinder of war, and stayed after the din of battle faded, the roads were closed and demons feasted on whatever remained.
“You” seems strange to say. “They came” seems more appropriate.
ou sense unnatural phenomena before anyone else.
You sense unnatural…
Order of the content in chapter 2
I really think that it would be better to sort the content in another order. First Attributes, Skills, Talents, Age, etc., and then the Profession. As I read first the Profession I didn’t know what to think about Pride and Dark Secrets.
You roll only for the adventurer with the highest reputation score – but what is with the KIN modifier? For example: the highest score is 5 for a human. And now the group is in a wolfkin settlement. But there is a wolfkin in the group with a score of 4. Will this score be used? Will the group always use the more favorable score?
The d12 you roll for Pride is the same as the Legendary Artifact Die? Meaning 6 to 9 is one success, 8 t0o9 two, 10 to 11 three and 12 four successes?
you at- tempt to craft the same item again.
You attempt to craft…
I am king!