Mon 16 Aug 2021, 00:10
Hello! I don't know where else to post typos besides this thread without making a new one. I was reading through the 2.0.2 to familiarize myself with the new addition awaiting the release. This is a very small grammar mistake, sorry if you find it too tedious or already found it, I just don't like seeing mistakes in publications.
On page 18 in the section about shadows, it states, "...between creativity and discipline — and what happens when (humanity mainly) cultivates nature...". Because statements in parentheses are read as asides to the actual script, the statement reads as "...between creativity and discipline — and what happens when cultivates nature...". Cultivates needs a noun to be applied to, I suggest: "people," "the people of Symbaroum," "beings," or "mortals." Doing so would necessitate that "cultivates" would lose the s as well.
So the updated sentence would read as: "...between creativity and discipline — and what happens when the people of Symbaroum (humanity mainly) cultivate nature..."
Again, sorry if this is unnecessary! Can't wait for the release, y'all rock!
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