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Tue 06 Jul 2021, 16:29

In general, prepositions and conjunctions should be lower case. The exceptions are first word in the Content title/subtitle, and when the preposition or conjunction are part for the proper name itself regardless of word order.


CORRECTIONS:

Under "Action Resolution" in the contents:
- "When To Roll" SHOULD BE "When to Roll"
- "Scenes In Brief" SHOULD BE "Scenes in Brief"

Under "Valour and Wisdom" in the contents:
- "The Rangers of The North" SHOULD BE "The Rangers of the North"

Under "Adventuring Phases" in the contents:
- "End of A Council" SHOULD BE "End of a Council"

Under "Loremaster" in the contents:
- "Sources Of Injury SHOULD BE "Sources of Injury"
- "Characters And Dice Rolls" SHOULD BE "Characters and Dice Rolls"
- "Orcs Of The North" SHOULD BE "Orcs of the North"


RECOMMENDATION:

Under "Adventuring Phases" in the contents:
- "Complication & Advantage" RECOMMEND AS "Complication and Advantage"
Would recommend using a consistent orthography for "and." Choose either "&" or "and" for you sections/sub-sections. This is especially important, consistent orthography, when the rulebook is read by someone with dyslexia for example.


QUESTION:
In the Table of Contents header, it says "CONTENT" ... should this not be "CONTENTS" ...? As in the "contents of this rulebook."

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