There needs to be a place for fatigue separate to load, as the latter will rarely change other than from applying the former.
There also doesn’t seem to be any space for fellowship focus to be recorded, or the fellowship pool. I’d also personally see more space given to the current attribute section, rather than (what I assume is) a picture box.
I would like to second the need for a separate space for logging fatigue emphatically! My biggest gripe with the previous edition's sheet was that it lacked this space. Let's not repeat this mistake. There's space on the left side of the main Endurance box, put it there.
It's my impression that there's a backside to this sheet that we have yet to see, I would expect to see space for Fellowship focus and pool there.
Finally my vote is for the 2nd of the four different sheets.