First of all a big thank you for bringing this book to life!
I just gathered some things that caught my eye - sorry if anybody already mentioned them! I haven't read the entire PDF but all I've seen so far is amazing!
On page 53, the Secret Box of the Black Dog says:
or a group of2-3 at most.
but I think it should be:
or a group of 2-3 at most.
It is just a missing space.
Not sure if it is just me who but I don't understand this sentence:
Certain herbs, placed above windows and doorways, and prevent a hag from entering a building or room: the common anti-witch charm of a sprig or rowan wrapped with red thread is also effective against hags.
(Hag, page 57) Especially the first part. I am not sure if we are missing a view words here of if we see two sentences mashed together. Sorry if it is just me not getting it.
Honestly I really like how the the size for the knocker is described - page 58.
It would be amazing to see it for the other Vaesen as well (Leprechaun, Nuckelavee)
18 inches (45 cm)
Pixies Condition Box says:
Furious +1 – uses both initiative cards
I just wanted to point out that the magical powers box states in all other cases (as far as I know) that they draw more than one initiative card.
Page 66 mentions a Brownie (placeholder page XX) in the Secret Box (Pooka) - I haven't found anything like that yet in the book. Maybe a typo, a cancelled vaesen or something yet to come?
Page 66 mentions that the Pooka can be killed with "certain magic items" - is this intended to be entirely up to the GMs or is there going to be a list?
I am sorry for the long post and I am sorry if some of the points are too much of a question rather than straight up typos. Anyway I hope it helps!