Tue 11 Jan 2022, 00:52
Thank you for sending the Alpha PDF. I enjoyed reading it.
I think that I found some typos. I'm not a native English speaker. I might be mistaken. Please check the following:
p. 53, left column, line 5 of bullet "The black dog of Hinton": front door of the house (replace "one" by "of")
p. 65, right column, bullet "Annie Tremannon": missing "." at the end.
p. 71, left column, line 2-3 of bullet "Ceffyl Dwr": from which it rushes ??? (replace "is" by "it" ?)
p. 92, right column, line 4 of "Clues": Stukeley (missing "e")
p. 94, right column, line 5: preparations for a confrontation ??? (remove "m" in "form" ?)
p. 102, right column, line 6 of bullet "The collapse": she marvels (she, not he)
p. 112, right column, line 5 of "Challenges": convince her (her, not him)
p. 114, left column, bullet "Hywel Jones": Hew Bach vs. Huw Bach
p. 115, right column, line 9: remove one "."
General: I found both Dickens' London (p 140) and Dickens's London (p 141). Is there a native speaker who can comment which version (s's vs. s' for nouns ending with "s") is correct? There are dozens of examples for both in the PDF.
Best wishes, Erik