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by gregory
Sun 19 Jun 2022, 19:49
Forum: General
Topic: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 7
Replies: 25
Views: 1434

Re: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 7

Page 202, "A recent 2032 edition to the RDU’s repertoire" should be "A recent 2032 addition to the RDU’s repertoire"
by gregory
Sat 18 Jun 2022, 15:45
Forum: General
Topic: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 6
Replies: 20
Views: 1180

Re: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 6

On page 141, "May they be friends or foes, it's understood..." is an awkward and non-standard phrasing, the common phrase is "Be they friends or foes, it's understood..."
by gregory
Sat 18 Jun 2022, 00:09
Forum: General
Topic: Early Access Feedback - Nitpick: "Megacorp"
Replies: 2
Views: 308

Early Access Feedback - Nitpick: "Megacorp"

This is such a minor nitpick that I feel a bit bad even making a dedicated thread for it, but since this definitely isn't an "error" and there is no general discussion thread for the early access files—and since this is a forum on the internet which is where nitpicking thrives—I figured wh...
by gregory
Fri 17 Jun 2022, 23:18
Forum: General
Topic: Early Access Feedback - Lore Concern (Positronic Brains)
Replies: 15
Views: 1404

Re: Early Access Feedback - Lore Concern (Positronic Brains)

Just one person's opinion here, but I think it could definitely lead to confusion. From my observation it's a surprisingly common misunderstanding amongst viewers of the first film to be unsure of the physical makeup of replicants—I think mostly due to some viewers not parsing the intended context o...
by gregory
Fri 17 Jun 2022, 23:01
Forum: General
Topic: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 6
Replies: 20
Views: 1180

Re: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 6

Perhaps this is just my misreading and apologies if so, but in the Blind Ambition article on page 131, what does the interviewer mean by "Aside from breeding like monkeys..." ? To me it sounds as if they're implying that the Nexus-6 are capable of reproduction, which is a concept that woul...
by gregory
Fri 17 Jun 2022, 22:39
Forum: General
Topic: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 5
Replies: 36
Views: 2617

Re: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 5

On page 126, the phrasing "I mean, if it's really so great up there..." seems out of step with the perspective of the rest of the prose. Who is "I" in this sentence? Is there intended to be some narrator? It implies an in-universe author and thus seems a strange turn of phrase fo...
by gregory
Fri 17 Jun 2022, 21:25
Forum: General
Topic: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 5
Replies: 36
Views: 2617

Re: Early Access Feedback - Core Rulebook Chapter 5

Not an error per se, but on page 117 your use of the word "homeless" could potentially be of minor concern. While this is still by far the most common term for those without homes, it might be worth noting that in the past few years public sentiment has been shifting toward using "hou...
by gregory
Fri 17 Jun 2022, 19:05
Forum: General
Topic: Early Access Feedback - Lore Concern (Positronic Brains)
Replies: 15
Views: 1404

Early Access Feedback - Lore Concern (Positronic Brains)

In chapter 6 on page 144, you reference the Nexus-6 as having a "positronic brain" which is lore-breaking. Asimov conceived the positronic brain as something electronic and robotic in nature, made of platinum and iridium. The Nexus-6 are fully organic beings. The inclusion of this term imp...
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