p. 10, second column, first paragraph, second sentence: "With Um-Durman in their possession can the player characters reach the Isle of Mist in the north and finally confront Azrahel Koth." This reads like a question ("can the player characters reach the Isle?") but doesn't have...
P38 Jack of All Trades "You do not have to write this heroic ability down on the character sheet." I don't understand what this implies. You have to take this Heroic ability more times to learn more Professional abilities. Why would you not write them down? How would you keep track? There...
…I'm more interested in why the ability is called Graverobber. The name has nothing to do with what the ability does. Monster Tracker or something akin to it would be more fitting.
Agreed. "Tracker" was the first name that came to my mind.
Page 38, Jack of All Trades. "You learn a profession ability from another profession than your own." This directly contradicts page 14, Profession Ability: "Each profession has a profession ability that no other profession can learn." Agreed. I'd suggest changing the text on p. ...
p. 12: Mallard's Ability: Ill-Tempered sidebar The wording for activation is self-contradictory. You can activate this ability if you have the Angry condition… and when you do so, you can choose to gain the Angry condition if you don't already have it. Meaning that you don't actually have to have t...
p. 5, The Players section Later chapters use the abbreviation "PCs" for "player characters" (pp. 34, 109, 111), but this abbreviation is not defined here (whereas the "GM" and "NPCs" abbreviations are both defined here). Suggestion: on p. 5, change this… Thes...
p. 17, second column, Death Roll section, first sentence: Change "a roll against you Constitution attribute" to "a roll against your Constitution attribute".
p. 15, Parrying section: it would be better to consistently use "parry" as the verb instead of using "block" and "parry" interchangeably. (As the text stands, with seven uses of "block" in this section, a new player may reasonably wonder what the difference be...
p. 7, second paragraph: "If you have a boon, only the best result applies. If you have a bane, only the worst result applies." Superlatives only apply when comparing three or more items, so this would be better written as "If you have a boon, only the be tter result applies. If you ha...
The PDF bookmark for Chapter 3: Landmarks → The Queen's Hall points to p. 78, but that landmark's description actually starts on p. 79. The bookmark should be updated to point to p. 79.