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Hi,

Will the campaign boxed set also go out for community feedback and proofreading like with the rulebook?

Are there any plans to add Path of Glory to Alchemy RPG VTT?

I find it a little bit odd that all of the other books are available on the VTT for Dragonbane, but not PoG.

Page 119:

• " THE RIVER OF STARS"

• "They are sometimes referred to as the River of the Stars..."

The heading says "The River of Stars", while in the text it says "the River of the Stars". Is the omission of one "the" intentional?

Page 166: "People here keep to themselves, and lost wanderers drift through the streets like the jinni of planet- bound tales." - I think you mean "djinni" and not "jinni". Both djinn and jinn are acceptable. But, whatever they decide to use, in this case it should be ...

Page 138: "...its precise location a closely guarded secret known only to the inner circle of the guild. Nowadays the Guild is run by the Triumvirate..." - Here is another example of both "the guild" and "the Guild" being used. "Nowadays the Guild is run by the Tri...

Page 136: "The Santarovean paintings of the inner hull are colossal art works made during the construction of Ship City by the then newly founded guild." - I think it should be written either "artworks" or "works of art", not "art works". "The Machinist G...

Page 102: If I understand the rules correctly shields can now only be used to block melee attacks. I understand if you don't want a shield to block a shot from a rifle, but right now it seems you can't use a shield to block a throwing blade. Page 100: Perhaps it could be fun to add more primitive pr...

Page 150: Sometime the text says "the Guild Militias", and other times "the Guild militias". Page 151: "The City is a wonder..." - I am not sure if it should be City or city here. You are talking about the only existing city after all. On the page you can read "the...

Page 175: Guild surveyor vs. guild surveyor. On this page you use both types of spelling, for example: "...named after the Guild surveyor Sigra Gelventer." "Named after the guild surveyor craft Albary North ... Is this intentional? Page 179: "...traveling the Slipstream would be ...

Page 171:

• "Jumuah is the heart and brains of the Lost Horizon..." - brain or brains? I guess either would be fine here.

• "...strategically positioned where all slipstream branches meet." - Should it be slipstream or Slipstream?